My Michelle

My Michelle

A Book by RainDancer1997
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This story is about a girl named Michelle who is human girl birthed by vampires.

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© 2013 RainDancer1997


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RainDancer1997
I hope you like my ideas and I accept anything you want to say about it:)

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You've got a fairly strong plot developing within the story so far. I think your characters are nicely described and aspects of them can be seens as relatable in certain ways, which is good, as it allows readers to bond with one character or another.
I think the biggest thing to watch for... is your simple misspellings. The grammer over all is quite strong, so you should be fine on that point.

Keep up the good work!
Aaron

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

Yea I ten to suck at grammar:p But I'm trying:) And thanks for reading:)!!!
RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

tend* sorry lol
Wolfwind

7 Years Ago

Trying is the best part, as it teaches us with every line. =)


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Your so talented!! Keep it up girilie :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FRIGGIN LOVE THE IDEA!!! sorry i just love vampires and fantasy. I'm hooked and i haven't even read anything :DD

Posted 7 Years Ago


RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

HAhaha I'm glad you like it:) lmao
You've got a fairly strong plot developing within the story so far. I think your characters are nicely described and aspects of them can be seens as relatable in certain ways, which is good, as it allows readers to bond with one character or another.
I think the biggest thing to watch for... is your simple misspellings. The grammer over all is quite strong, so you should be fine on that point.

Keep up the good work!
Aaron

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

Yea I ten to suck at grammar:p But I'm trying:) And thanks for reading:)!!!
RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

tend* sorry lol
Wolfwind

7 Years Ago

Trying is the best part, as it teaches us with every line. =)
Will read later. Looks interesting though. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


You've got an interesting plot here. I'll be sure to work my way through the novel and give you my thoughts!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RainDancer1997

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot:)

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Added on July 16, 2013
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Tags: Romance, Vampires, supernatural, Drama

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RainDancer1997
RainDancer1997

ragland, AL



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I'm from a small town in Alabama and I love skateboards and any type of rock music. I love to talk to anyone, and I hope ya'll like my writings:)! MY fav music:) Sleeping with Sirens .. more..

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