The Truth

The Truth

A Chapter by Luna
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I wrote this when I was angry and upset. I don't know if you can really tell though. Sorry.

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The truth is
I don’t care.
You may think I do
But obviously you don’t know me.
It is your choice
And I can’t make it for you.
I can try to influence you,
Say what I think would be the best for you,
But I can’t put a gun to your head
And threaten you if you don’t do it.
 
I know I had no chance,
That you wouldn’t consider me
As anymore that what I already am to you,
Gutter snipe.
The stupid person who won’t leave you alone
But you are nice to
Because they have “issues.”
I’m a charity case.
People just want to “help” me.
 
It may sound vain
But I knew I was correct.
You were so blatantly obvious,
So very easy to read.
But yet,
Everyone refused to believe me,
Refused to think that the stupid girl
Might actually be able to see things,
Might not be blind.


© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
Please ignore the grammar problems but if I spelled something wrong, I would greatly appreciate it if you told me. I'm not very good at spelling. I would also love your feedback. Thanks!

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This is what I would call a lyrically-free-flowing-expulsion. Poetry is the essence of the the souls expression, the heart is the voice that speaks! Treasure your writing and reflect onto it always, as it opens doors for you to yourself!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Never underestimate a woman. I learn in my life. A woman is always thinking. Man never really knows what is hidden in a woman mind. Poem is very good. I like the description and reaction of the woman in the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


well,,8s very nice,, I really appreciate ur writings:) keep it up!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's s**t. LOL. No, it's good. Things written in extreme emotion are always the best.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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