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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Unwanted

Unwanted

A Chapter by Luna
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My feelings at the current moment

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I know I’m not the loved one

I screw up now and then

But that’s no reason to hate me

But I doubt that’ll ever change

I know that I make comments

That you don’t appreciate

But every now and then

I like to be acknowledged

You tell me that you love me

But why does that seem untrue

All you ever seem to do

Is ignore me, that’s the truth

I get that I’m unwanted

But I don’t blame you

No one would ever want me

A failure.



© 2011 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
Don't be to harsh, it is just me needing to dump my feelings. too much is going on.

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The poem tells a sad story. Real friends accept mistakes and allow you regain your life and spirit. Love support to be kind. Sometime we can create blockage to what we really want and need. A excellent poem. No-one is a failure.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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I am a helpless romantic who also loves to attempt to write romance adventure (my novel Maiden Voyage for example) but I tend to try to stick more to poetry. I am southern (yes, I do have an accent) a.. more..

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