Hypocrites

Hypocrites

A Chapter by Luna
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rage

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You say you are my friend,
Your on my side,
You understand how I feel,
You are there to talk to
When I need to.

You completely ignore me,
Flirt with the girl whom upset me,
Tell me
She never did anything wrong after you agreed with me,
Ignore my phone calls
When I call to ask why.

You're a hypocrite through and  through,
Saying one thing and doing another,
Nagging me.
From now on,
What you say will go in one ear
And come out the other.


© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
This is written for a "friend" a.k.a. the biggest asshole on the face of this planet. Hope you like it douche!

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Lol, love the author's note.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a great poem, I love how you release your true feelings. I think I know who this is for :P

~L'Amour De Musique

Posted 14 Years Ago


Full of anger... I like this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A wise man show appreciation to one woman. Poem is very good. Hypocrites are the worst people. They get twisted up and don't know the truth from a lie. A excellent poem. A perfect ending to the poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Must have been a total a*s... Anyway, you've got a few typos with your "yours". You're = you are. 10/10!

Posted 14 Years Ago


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahahahahahahahah sorry but its so true,... about the phone thing anyways.... totall a-hole!!! You rock girl! 100%!!!

Yours truly, Rose

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it. It's empowering. You did a great job ^-^

Posted 14 Years Ago


LoL I'm sorry, I don't mean to laugh, but You Go Girl.
Write it Out!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 15, 2010
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Luna

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