I'm sorry I have to kill you...

I'm sorry I have to kill you...

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

   I can feel her inside of
   me, moving and
   breathing.

   She isn't a human yet,
   but I know she is there. 

   I place my hand on
   my stomach and cry.

   I love her.

   I haven't met her,
   but I love her.

   I can't kill someone
   I love.

   I can't do this...

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I'm too mad at myself and depressed to explain whats going on, but its clearly stated in this...
(I don't want your pity, by the way.)

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my girlfrend had an abortion when we were very young,looking back it was the right thing to do cos we had no support or money,i later married her and we had three kids

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awww, so sweet. Pregnancy is a sweet thing. And those who choose abortion well it's all on their concience. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is really good honey i like it alot

Posted 8 Years Ago


I agree - with the comment below, so I'll just say this - Life isn't the hand you are dealt, but how you play it. You can plug Love or Regret into this sentence, as are interrelated - If you think the ______ is strong now, it won't compare to how strong it could/will be in years to come. No reason for depression or anger, things happen for a reason

As for the poem, well written, well done. 100/100 as well

Posted 8 Years Ago


awee

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's not, Naomi, whether you can kill someone you love, but rather can you kill someone you hate or for that matter anyone at all...It is a very well written, powerful statement that has been debated for decades. I could see this with a picture next to it (pick any one of thousands) and used as an argument "against".
Good luck
allen

Posted 8 Years Ago


You never regret giving love only losing it
this poem will reach out to all that reads it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Painful the situation not reading the peom well it is a sad poem but i hope expressing what ypur feeling helps you make up you rmind.... I hope you make the right decsion the one thats truely in your heart. I hope it works out for you

Posted 8 Years Ago


painfully sad but beautifully expressed. a very nice write on a delicate subject. hope this helped you to vent your emotions...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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