Always Remember

my promise

Whatever happens
Always remember that
This heart of mine is only for you

I may keep quiet for long
To give that serenity you need
I may stop moving towards you
To give you more space
I may seem numb for a while
To give you that freedom

I may not look at you this time
I may not listen to your song
I may not dance with you on the floor

But please always remember...

I am just here in one corner
Waiting for you to pass
It's enough for me to look at you
From a distance
So I won't bother you
With my presence
I am just here to listen to your words
Because they are my only strength
In this chaotic world

I won't say goodbye
Because I know
Our paths will cross again
And I promise,
At that time
you will be proud of me.

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

So how do we express ourselves the right way? This piece begs the question so well. Love is raw and meaningful bit there are man y times that we just can't seem to express it the way we want to often misunderstood. You have a way with words here with this one.

Well done.

Regards Troy

[one sky]

Thanks so much, Troy

[St.Quin]

Sweet and sad. The emotion in this piece can be easily felt by the reader, a one-sided love expressed beautifully. Great poem.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I won't say goodbye
Because I know
Our paths will cross again
And I promise,
At that time
you will be proud of me.


I can see the love is all raining from your words, its really amazing!

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!

[one sky]

Thank you so much!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

wow that was deeply sentimental and sweet, sounds like my definition of unconditional love.

[one sky]

Thank you, sir. I will return the favor to your pieces for sure. God bless!

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Very beautiful. I can relate to your words. Sometimes love's intentions can be misunderstood. You crafted and expressed that so well right here.