White Rose

So here we are, same time, same place
Same experience, but there's no taste
And here I thought I'd never see that smile again
But it doesn't feel as nice as it was back then

You were the voice that once defined my passion
When I still tried my best to cease any action
When we were young and waiting for life to start
And we had no one to listen to except our hearts

There's no doubt, to me, you were a young white rose
The way you used to excite me when you wiggle your toes
It still kinda does everytime you try to
But time's passed already so don't let me pry you

As I try to remember the memories once sweet
With rhymes so deep they almost punch through my seat
But I can't help but feel we're still as young
And now I'm screaming out with half a lung

If you read this far, I guess I'm still at denial
That you're so happy with him, it seems so vital
But hey, you're happy, and that's what matters to me
Because that smile, your smile is all I want to see

Reviews

[WordlessFacade]

I love your poems! I get so many feelings when I read them, and I can't wait to read more. Keep writing! :)

[Oran]

Thanks. Feels good for someone to appreciate my work ^^

[WordlessFacade]

Your welcome! ^u^