the true angel

the truth is telling and from now they get responsibility for the world

-theo

            i open the door and enter the room whoaa.. this room is really amazing the roof is like endless skies and the room is set like inside church but there's no place for priest, but there a king's chair. someone sit at the king's chair, he is old and has really brightly wings. i knees in front of him.

 

"thanks to come to my room, theo" said angel lord and tell me to stand up with his hand

"this is an honor to meet with you directly" i said while stand up and saluted him

 

            there's a click sound sign the door is opened by someone, i look at the door and gasped.

 

-aray

            i enter the room and really amazed woohoo.. this room is really friendly, its not like the judgement room. i look the end of the room and i see someone is in front of angel lord (i think because he is sit at king's chair). if i remember correctly, he is theo, my twins. why he is here?? i look at him.

 

-theo

            it's can't be, that's my twins brother, aray. i look at his eyes deeply. why we are be here together??

 

-narator

            while they two confused and look at each other, the lord angel stand up and said

 

"you late, aray. see, your brother is working at night but he is be here before you" said the angel lord, break the silence

"sorry, my lord.." said aray while knees

"it's ok" he said while tell him to stand up by his hand "now you're meet each other again. it been 1 year you never meet, right?"

"yes.." said both

"okay, why i call you two, both, to my room because i have some important information" said the angel lord while walks in front of them "you had bad job and you really don't like it, right?"

they are nodded

"that's not because my fault or the angels that met you, that's your destiny" the angel lord look inside their eyes

"our destiny??" they whispering almost at same time, confuse

"yea.. you two is the leader of the fallen angels" said the lord while sit at his chair and smiled

"what!!" aray yelled "i like to be light angel, although i hate it, than be a fallen angel!"

"that's mean we don't have wings and don't have angel power again" said theo

"you're different. you are is the leader, you still have yours wings and you have special power" said the angel lord while stand up and walks in front of them again

"leader of fallen angel??" they ask at same time

"you'll know about that, first please open your shirt and show me where is the mark" 

"okay" they both open they shirt and there's no mark at their chest

"hold your breath, it may hurt" said the lord angel while hold his hand at their chest, his hand is brightly.

 

            the angel lord put his hand on their chest and release his power. aray and theo feel really hurt and burn at their chest and they feel that their wing is changed. the angel lord put his hand down, aray and theo fall sit down.

 

"the mark at your chest is now permanent" said the angel lord

"your wings.. your wings is mine! but, why you just have one wing?" said aray, looking at theo

"and yours is mine and just same like me, you only have one wing. why??" said theo, looking at aray. they both confuse

"now you're is the leader of fallen angels" said the angel lord while help them to stand up "known as White night angel and Dark light angel"

they both gasped, they know about White night angel and Dark light angel legendary

"you have wings that depends on your heart and you have special ability" said the angel lord while make a hole by his power "now just do your job" the angel lord push them to the hole

"aaaaaah...!!" they fall inside the hole

 

            aray and theo fall to a really deep dark hole, they can't fly, and ended to a dark place. they're fainted.

Author's Note

sorry if i use wrong words or my grammar messed up
i give more some fixing to fit to the next chapter
enjoy the story~
note: the correct is angel lord or lord angel??

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I believe it is lord angel

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay..

[Ruby]

It needs some fixing but it's really good keep it up. :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. i'll edit this book, if i have much time
my school always take my time :(

[Ruby]

ok :)

[Anonymous Girl]

I like it. I'd say angel lord :) keep writing :)
100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Anonymous Girl]

Its okay :)

[Rhianne Ney]

I would ignore the wrong parts here again ... this is really interesting... keep wwriting...

[Irvette Dauphine]

you always ignore it, please message me if you can fix it
as i told you, i have no much time DX

[Rhianne Ney]

sorry.. the author's note told me to ignore it

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. it's ok :)
that not what i mean, i just say sorry :P

[Rhianne Ney]

the first one theo's story... told me to ignore it just respecting your views

[Irvette Dauphine]

it ok :)

[Rhianne Ney]

=D i'll point it out to you if you wish to

[Irvette Dauphine]

just message me, but i won't to change it today, because it impossible.. ;)

[Rhianne Ney]

yeah...

[Rhianne Ney]

please bear with me and my opinions

[FrancescaX]

lord angel i think...?!
i like the contradiction. white with night and dark with light.
very good, Irvette

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. thanks~

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

CLIFFHANGER ALERT

hehehehe... random...

Very nice chapter. Again you presented your ideas perfectly fine despite your difficulties with grammar

[Irvette Dauphine]

sorry about the cliffhanger ;)
yea.. thanks~

[Tattered Teddy]

Interesting, I like the way you layed this out. As far as angel lord, or lord angel ... I would say tis your story and either way would be correct. :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Oh no! A cliffhanger >_<
I enjoyed the chapter, but I just get so tensed when it comes to a cliffhanger >..<
100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

sorry for that..
if i continue to write on here the story may so long and that mean 2 chapter be 1 chapter

[Irvette Dauphine]

;)

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It's great! And I would love it if u continued.

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay then, i'll start writing the next story :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

i already fix little mistakes in here..

[Irvette Dauphine]

;)

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:)

[Irvette Dauphine]

have read this again??

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I read the stories I like many times
Yes,I've read this again :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay, wait for awhile, i almost finish next chapter :)

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Pls, finish soon. Can't wait! =)

[Irvette Dauphine]

loading -____-"

[Irvette Dauphine]

already finish, read it :D

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ok tnx

[Weeping Willow]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. what happens next

[Irvette Dauphine]

want me to continue this story or i tell the history first??

[Irvette Dauphine]

i already fix little mistakes in here

[Irvette Dauphine]

;)