theo's story

I finish my job and fly to the angel hall with my partner, rodhi. he is still smiling cause our mission is kill someone and take all of his goods. I feel really sad to him even I cant see his face while rodhi kill him and I cant touch his goods. as far as i been an angel i never kill someone, i just kidnap someone or stole some goods that i think not really important. just do that i feel so guilty. if i kill someone, maybe i'll kill myself because of my guilt.

"what's wrong aray? your face is really.. cant say it. can you smile??" said rodhi while see my face

"it's ok! our job is finish right? i want to go home!" I said, yelled

"yea.. our job is finish now" he said while go to storage room

"ok then, I go home now. I am tired" I said while fly go to my home

I arrived home at half to 5 at morning. I go to bathroom, take a fast warm bath and then go to sink to wash my face and brush my teeth. really, I am a night angel and have black feathered wings there appear a mark on my chest this mark, appear and disappear suddenly, a pair of black feathered wings. huh... are that's mean I am really a night angel? I am really don't want it I yawning okay.. time to take a rest. I take out my clothes and then go to bed, sleep.

suddenly my phone ringing. I wake up, check what time is it 6 o'clock? I am just sleep for 1 hour. I sit up and pick up the phone

"hello.. theo here..."

"theo, the lord call you to his room, there's somethings important that he want to said to you" said an angel soldier

"hmmmm... okay then, i'll go to there immediately" I answered, feel scare and curios

"okay, waiting for you at the angel hall" he close the conversation

i put down my phone why the angel lord call me? am I will get punish because I don't do my job correctly?? lets find out then although I feel scare, but I am curious. I get off from my bed go to bathroom to wash my face and then grab my clothes and wearing it. and from window, i fly to the angel hall.

arrived at angel hall, the soldier that call me and lead me to the lord room. it pass the long alley and at the end of the alley, there's the angel lord's room. I open the door with with mixed feeling of fear and curiosity and I enter the room.

Author's Note

sorry for this story is short. i still adding more description..
and sorry if i use wrong word or my grammar is messed up
enjoy the story~

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

At first, I was like *gasp* "what mean angels!" but then I saw that they were fallen, and I got it. Cool idea :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. anyway, i'll edit this book later, when i have time..
my school always take my time :(

[Anonymous Girl]

Really interesting :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Anonymous Girl]

Its okay :)

[Rhianne Ney]

It's short but meaningful... I'm going to ignore the corrections so I wont offend you... unless you would want me to do it... (:
Anyway this really is interesting (:
Since you said it's Aray's story... and also with Theo's
umm... I suggest that you tell us how it all really started their daily lives before the angels give them the exam just suggesting... (:

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay.. that was i think awhile ago, i will make this stories is about their daily..
thanks anyway :)

[Rhianne Ney]

welcome (:

[FrancescaX]

please continue with your idea. you can create suspense so well. you are a good story teller.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks :)

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Too excited about the next chapter to write a credible review but just want to say Nice work XD

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks XD

[Weeping Willow]

I fell sorry for Theo :(

[Irvette Dauphine]

he will get better job..
at next chapter, everything is changed :)

[Serenity Faith]

GAH! what happen's next!? *clicks next chapter button*

[Irvette Dauphine]

still working on the next chapter :)
please waiting for it ^_^

[Dominique]

Oh? Both boys are sent there, What is going to happen????

[Irvette Dauphine]

yep.. i still working on it.. just waiting ;)

[Dominique]

M'kay :)

[Love Demon]

its kinda hard reading the book with alot of grammar errors and misspelled words, but I'll go with it. good job ^_^

[Irvette Dauphine]

ooops.. sorry.. i work at it at night, so i cant really focus. i fix it this morning..
btw, thanks to read ^_^

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I enjoyed this chapter ^_^
Keep on going OwO
100/100

[Love Demon]

darn! i wanted to be the first one to review this chaper, eh, I guess I lost :P

[∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿]

It doesn't really matter :/
The only thing that matters is that you read your friend's work ^_^

[Love Demon]

i know, but I just wanted to beat you at something

[∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿]

You already did ^_^

[Irvette Dauphine]

glad to hear you enjoy it, roxast ^_^
you still have another change, lovedemon :)