The Chosen One
A Book by ShaunMosley
© 2012 ShaunMosley
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Please review and leave whatever suggestions you feel would be helpful
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Okay, Shaun, I read the whole thing, it took time, on and off, and for me to contemplate about it...you got something, however, its like a rapture series I once read....where's the love interest? The drama in war? People that love to read like me about? I seen Django Unchained recently, and Quentin Tarantino never fails to deliver...he just brings it...what I'm saying is just like novels of "Hunger Game"...you need the human interest...I like the research you put into the Tibetan life style in prologue...but got lost in the subsequent chapters...intrigue me brother man, like your poems...shoot, I'm inspired to write a story of a similar fate now lol...but Shaun you got something, you just have to dig deeper, my man.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Hey Ev,
Thanks for reading,
Its getting to it,
you just gotta give it ti.. read moreHey Ev,
Thanks for reading,
Its getting to it,
you just gotta give it time, this aint a short story my dude its an epic, change the world kinda piece...the invasion is about to begin, but you gotta have all the players first...its coming
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11 Years Ago
Man, you inspired me bro, I want to write a short story, something similar but my own twist....its a.. read moreMan, you inspired me bro, I want to write a short story, something similar but my own twist....its a lost art, that is short stories...but I believe you...you have something...you may wanna network with other book writers, there are many on here...but they fail to realize, Poets read novels too...so for those who don't read poetry in general, would lose readership...we are all Writers, in some shape or form...I'll follow your book...the knock to some folks on here, some people don't complete their books, so people don't want to read it...but if you are committed, to it, I'm sure readers like me would follow. Food for thought. :)
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11 Years Ago
ive got a publisher lined up so its gotta get finito
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11 Years Ago
I believe it...good luck bro.
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11 Years Ago
oh yeah and you may be confused by the fact that i changed the girls main character halfway through .. read moreoh yeah and you may be confused by the fact that i changed the girls main character halfway through the chapters on my copy but not on here. that would be kinda confusing
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11 Years Ago
her name went from Alicia to Jade...but I didnt change it on here...i will
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11 Years Ago
I got something in mind to write, it may take a month or less to post...apocalyptic, is something th.. read moreI got something in mind to write, it may take a month or less to post...apocalyptic, is something they'll get...but in my own interpretation.
I'll follow your success, bro. I wish you the best. :)
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11 Years Ago
Nice names...Alicia is great, though. :)
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11 Years Ago
im anxious to read what u write about....
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11 Years Ago
I dont think people would be ready...I read these teenage angst or 20 something year old anger poems.. read moreI dont think people would be ready...I read these teenage angst or 20 something year old anger poems...sheesh...read more, and respect your elders...like life wasn't lived before you or something....I write in beauty because I want to avoid the dark side....maybe, its something I should delve into, Once. lol
I'll let you know.
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Added on December 8, 2012
Last Updated on December 18, 2012
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ShaunMosleyBaltimore, MD
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I am a 33 year old small business owner. I am originally from Lexington Kentucky and currently residing in Baltimore, Maryland. I prefer reading and writing fiction, and other creative pieces. more..
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