Heal the Sained

A song, needs a beat, any ideas?

how are we gonna make it in this world of ours
Where everybody's drivin' planes, trains, or cars
And people gettin' drunk in all the bars
the sky's the limit but we have machines on Mars
and they tell us that the world is ours

To change
Rearrange
blessed the pained
Heal the sained

I don't know where I'll be tomorrow
I know I won't drown in my sorrow
I won't be another soul to go
Everybody else will hit the bottle
I'll be the one standing on top though

To change
rearrange
bless the pained
Heal the sained

This is me it's who I am
and I don't care if you give a dam
I'll be driving through town
Get out of my way just scram
I don't need you bringing me down

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

That's my goal
that much I know
I won't fall into the hole
even if I grow old
I will still fight for what I hold

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
Heal the sained

this is my game
My fame
No dame
Only my name
it's all the same

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

Living in this place we call the earth
where we were at our birth
And our death
When nothing's left
my soul still won't rest

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

Same story it's getting old
always do what you're told
But I want my fate to hold
till I've showed
That I won't go cold

To change
Rearrange
Bless the pained
Heal the sained

Reviews

[Mariah Corey]

I luv how u say "That's my goal
that much I know
I won't fall into the hole
even if I grow old
I will still fight for what I hold" I am glad there's still some people that will fight even when it looks bleak. u can feel wht u r supposed to feel, but there are sometimes when i don't feel anything, just words. i hoped this helped. Luv it though. :D

[Jordan A. Wilson]

nice job, mane. i think it flows better in some places than others but overall i liked it. can't wait to read more.

[That_Girl]

For some reason, the first thing I thought of was Limp Bizkit.... a VERY clean version of something they would write. They are superb and if you haven't listened to them, check them out so you can get a feel for what I'm saying.

Love the lyrics. Well done! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I've heard a song or two of theirs. I like thw who's behind blue yees better xD and thanks

[Harley (arbiter)]

*eyes

[That_Girl]

lol predictable. ;) jk jk

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol kinda xD

[Erika Jones]

I like it :) Sounds like a rap in my head though xD! Keep up the amazing work :) And I know how it's like to have only a phone. My laptop is a piece of garbage and only works in front of a huge fan because it never stays cool, even with a laptop fan.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks! And yeah it kinda stinks but I used my noggin and found a way! Good luck with your laptop. Sounds like it needs some repair :/

[Erika Jones]

I need a new battery, but I can't afford it. I probably need a new fan for it also. But I'm trying to find ways to save up for a new laptop. I need it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah nice. Send me the old one. I like fix it up prodjects even though I don't have the time or money to fix them up all the way xD if you do get a new laptop I recomend those hp davilion dv6t I do believe its called. I had one once. It could do everything you wanted it to x10 and still run smoothly and fast. Kinda expensive though but all the good quality items are :D

[Erika Jones]

Lol, I was thinking about saving up for one of those, then a MAC for my music stuff.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah nice. Good luck! Have fun paying for them :D

[Erika Jones]

Oh I'm gonna have fun ... I have no job and no money in my name :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah what a blast! Sounds like me!

[Erika Jones]

You're not 22 and living with your parents. Too crippled to get a job that's close to home. (All those jobs are where I stand for hours at a time.)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well no I'm not your right but still. Eh

[afra]

wow another great song ....good job

[Crimson Bayonet]

nice poem/song thingy lol :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks everybody! :)

[T. Logan]

I think it does have a beat, if it were just a poem. I can't help though. I can't make up music. This is really good though!

[Renée]

Great song lyrics & title ..I assume on to the music..

[nigrum homonculus]

its pretty good! never knew you could write lyrics. what owlgirl said though. read it to some instrumentals maybe? see where it takes you