You Touch Me

You Touch Me

A Poem by wordman
"

"
I touched you,
last night .
your skin so soft,
as i caressed your soul.

Your lips
wet,and sweet,
when we`re together,
i feel complete.

You touch me,
i explode inside,
my feelings for you,
i could never hide.

I touched you,
last night.
and you,
you touched me...

© 2016 wordman


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

what more can i say? it clearly speaks about the love of a man for his woman. in this poem it is more on the side of the man to express how to love and what is to love. very good writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

true love makes all the difference,love is elevated to a new level
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
...
Talented poem from talented poet. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

i am homered,thank you
Very touching. You can feel the emotion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
A very deep write, explaining love going deeper than touch and emotions being more than just feelings

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,i appreciate it
Beautifully written and so in depth

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Scerina Elizabeth

4 Years Ago

Your very welcome :)
this one is amazing i tell you. very sweet and innocent and filled with love

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

you are to kind,thank you !
This is beautiful I bet she is a lucky lady

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

t j i thank you again ! you know a poet is only a myth
TeeJae {TJ} Hart

4 Years Ago

Sometimes a myth can also hold a deeper meaning
 wordman

4 Years Ago

a myth with a pots pen
So Nice It Reminds Me Of My Lover.......HEr Beautiful Eyes......

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

4 Years Ago

her eyes are the mirror of her soul,letting you see into her soul,,thank you for the visit
This passion-filled piece stands out for its simple, sweet verses, the completness of expression.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you divia
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

Its such a pleasure!
A gentle but emotion packed love story in a crisp set of stanzas Ron.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you john !

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

2002 Views
42 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on September 21, 2016
Last Updated on September 21, 2016

Author

 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



About
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Moon Beams Moon Beams

A Poem by wordman


Love Smoke Love Smoke

A Poem by Paul Bell