On Your Heart

 

  On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint .

 

You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night.

 

Or maybe i`ll come,

from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.  

 

Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart

where we will never part...

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Always such beautiful words you write...always touches my heart...🌹

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[wordman]

i will take that as you`re welcome

[Pryde Foltz]

These words begged to be sung. So beautiful, Ron:)

[wordman]

well,sing it pryde,,thanks

[Richard 🍃]

Gosh, Ron 😳
You'll have all the ladies queuing and elbowing to be first in line, and all the gents envious of your romantic ways … that steal all the poetesses' hearts away.
This is sheer wonderment to the soul, My Friend, and the picture is perfection in harmony to your poem, as is Elvis … sheesh! You've done it all to a tee.
And, a nice rhythmic beat keeps the flow dancing right along.

You just keep getting better and better … amen. : )
Thank you for one truly inspiring poetic treat! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[wordman]

thank you my friend for the inspiring review

[Richard 🍃]

Ya got it goin' jussst right, Ron!
You make poetry fun, interesting, and entertaining … it is I who thank You! ; )

[wordman]

just another love song as paul said,just another love song

[Richard 🍃]

Aw,
It's a bit more smoothly fetching than that, my friend.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Word... you are a romantic renaissance man ...
a flickering light ... a candle burning in your heart
until the end of time. truly, Pat

[wordman]

thanks pat

[lovely.poets.]

beautiful! i've read this over & over wanting more each time. beautifully conveyed !

[wordman]

thank you for the comment

[Willoby]

Such soulful wishes. It is all we can hope for. That somehow our lives mattered and that the love we have given will be forever held. Softly a love song. Thank you for this tender smile...
Willoby

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sami Khalil]

"You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night."

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Wordman.

[DAH]

Nothing but sweet, loving words. Simply beautiful and easy on the heart.

Bravo!
DAH

[wordman]

thank you mr d a h ,i appreciate the visit

[DAH]

M pleasure!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This sounds like a romantic song to me.
I felt the warm feeling, the love relayed and the mind of good hope longing to reconcile again.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Fay Slimm]

Only a warm romantic could write words such as these - gently assuring of love evermore would be many a lady's dream. Thanking you too for the wonderful number my friend.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit fay