My Angel...

My Angel...

A Poem by Rahul Bakolia
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This was written for her.

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Some people believe there is a one, 
The one who points your way to the sun.
A person they believe makes them complete,
The one who will support when facing defeat.

You are my angel, my one and only,
My forever love, so we'll never be lonely.
You've brought to my life all your love and care.
It made me see when I realized how rare
It is to meet your angel, or their lifetime one,
Through you and my children, whose life has begun.

What you've done, you've illuminated my soul.
It's you and your love that has made me whole.
The feel of your love, your soft touch and caress,
We're tight, so close; your heart beats in my chest.

All that we have always felt missing before.
Though I love you today, tomorrow it will be more.
Our love is life; we are the strongest tree,
Which will always grow forever, like you and me.

You have opened my heart and held it so dear.
You are my angel and will always keep it near.
You have seen my ups and cared when I was low.
You are my angel; I just need you to know.

You entered my life through a ray of sun above, 
And when we leave, we will leave together in love.
My love for you has become my reason to be.
I hope one day you'll find your angel in me.

© 2018 Rahul Bakolia


Author's Note

Rahul Bakolia
Your little appreciation and honest feedback make me write even more. A person who feels appreciated will always do more than expected.

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This is a beautiful tribute to that special person who has made such a difference to your life through her loving and caring nature. Your lines generated great warmth and love to this reader. You were able to convey how very special your angel is. All good wishes.

Chris

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Very well composed dear Rahul.Loved ones can bring an unexpectable change in our live and your poem is an example of one such Change.
Thank you for a good read!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Not everyone manages to find a special angel and so you are blessed Rahul ... a alovely tribute to her :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Just beautiful and i hope this is true and you are with your angel- i believe everyone has someone like this but some dont realise what they have until they lose it- beautiful and i pray the two of you stay together forever🌹

Posted 4 Months Ago


This is awesome, Rahul. Bravo

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful tribute to that special person who has made such a difference to your life through her loving and caring nature. Your lines generated great warmth and love to this reader. You were able to convey how very special your angel is. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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49 Years Ago

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49 Years Ago

Oh i like your poems and I think that angel in your life is quite lucky . Thanx for sharing such a beautiful poem . Keep writing (((smiles))) 😊😊😊😊

Posted 5 Months Ago


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49 Years Ago

If this doesn't touch peoples heart when they read this then there's something wrong with them
You have captured your angel perfectly. Just beautiful


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49 Years Ago

You are a very fine poet. You write poetry with such passion that it touches the heart of readers. You are great in writing poems too just how amazingly you write satirical and humourous stories. Well done, thank you so much for sharing this.

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49 Years Ago

Awwww! So tender and sweet. This is a beautiful homage to that special angel in your life Rahul. Great flow, rhythm and rhyme. Heartfelt and captivating words. Love it!

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49 Years Ago

So sweetened stanzas here Rahul brrro!! Can this font get bit bigger for easy read? Or perhaps it's because the fonts are bold...However!!!....this angelic angel is way too lucky, no? :D You know why!

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Added on December 13, 2018
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Tags: Love, romance, romentic, fantasy, affection, joy, angel.

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Rahul Bakolia
Rahul Bakolia

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