Surreal Love

Surreal Love

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry



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Ohhh-MY, Dear Sil,
And, in Free Verse Quatrains … love it! : )
What a distinct honor and privilege it is to immerse mind, heart, emotions, and soul into such a moving and intricately woven expression of passion breathed out of your depths ⁓ into your fantasy lover's heart.
With genuinely unique and tenderly soothing (albeit stirring) poetic voice and deftly skilled power of stunning metaphorical imagery, combining, heaven, earth, and Nature, your ink sweeps through one's senses as smoothly and seamlessly as windblown silk undulating to the rhythms of a soft, warm summer breeze … and, beginning each verse with "Between" is a stroke of sheer genius that pulls us into every beguiling beginning, as tho' it's a romantic mystery unfolding.

Catching my breath, let me bow most graciously and gratefully in homage and thanks to you for sharing this emblematically gorgeous peek into your heart, thank you sincerely, Sil ⁓ Richard : )


Love the dreamy mood and feel of your picture choice, too!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

STUNNING review dear Richard, it will keep me smiling for a longggg time! God Bless indeed!
T.. read more



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Your words flow with grace and beauty.
Your poem is mesmerizing since the beginning.
Wonderful writing!!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

Wonderful words of yours, and my absolute greatfulness for your review! Stay well ;-)
Ohhh-MY, Dear Sil,
And, in Free Verse Quatrains … love it! : )
What a distinct honor and privilege it is to immerse mind, heart, emotions, and soul into such a moving and intricately woven expression of passion breathed out of your depths ⁓ into your fantasy lover's heart.
With genuinely unique and tenderly soothing (albeit stirring) poetic voice and deftly skilled power of stunning metaphorical imagery, combining, heaven, earth, and Nature, your ink sweeps through one's senses as smoothly and seamlessly as windblown silk undulating to the rhythms of a soft, warm summer breeze … and, beginning each verse with "Between" is a stroke of sheer genius that pulls us into every beguiling beginning, as tho' it's a romantic mystery unfolding.

Catching my breath, let me bow most graciously and gratefully in homage and thanks to you for sharing this emblematically gorgeous peek into your heart, thank you sincerely, Sil ⁓ Richard : )


Love the dreamy mood and feel of your picture choice, too!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

STUNNING review dear Richard, it will keep me smiling for a longggg time! God Bless indeed!
T.. read more
So beautiful. The gentle and kind thoughts made the reader feel and understand. The gift of beauty and love is near always. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

i am so glad the reader can feel this :-)
I am grateful for your kind words!!
Stay wel.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
I wrote something similar to this about the possibility of love traveling across distance, people, places and things connecting with the person you love most. What you wrote is amazing. it will stay with me for a long time.BEAUTIFUL

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

I know, I read it and I love it! ;-)
Well then I am happy you enjoy it to the point of not fo.. read more
This poem is glittering with devotion. Your style is pleasing with easy going images which I like.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

So kind of you to read and review it, thank you so much for your wonderful words :-)
This is a beautiful, transcendent painting of love, pathways of joy that seem to open in every thought of your beloved. May your love only find you both in everlasting blessings.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

I thank you indeed Dear Craig, for your appreciable words.
Actually, this poem was not about.. read more
An owl on the moon

10 Months Ago

Ah, then so grateful for your inspiration! Hoping you find this kind of love always filling your lif.. read more
A deeply romantic write full of lovely descriptions.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

10 Months Ago

Thank you ever so much John, for your kind words :-)
Enchanting, beautiful and a mesmerizing write,Sil.
I love the uniqueness of this write. Very delicate and soothing piece to read :-) I could feel the warmth of that love that you are emoting to us readers. I love poems in which writers tend to use the elements of nature and existence and this is definitely one of them.
This is surely a surreal love and write :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

So very kind of you to read, and such wonderful review...Thank you very much indeed, Manu!
Re.. read more
A gorgeous write to say the least. What a beautiful weaving of love, nature and the soul with the promises of light...Enjoyed...:).........

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

I am glad indeed that you enjoy it ;-)
Thanks a million for your time and sweet words!
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Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome...:)..........................
A beautiful imagination of all those moments that are perfec for romantic love. Though I favor spiritual love than romantic, I love your metaphors that you have used to portrayed those moments. well written poem with free verse. these line are so touching, "Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by the motion of fresh winds and one thousand innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you…"
thanks for sharing, Sil :-)

Best
szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

I also favour spiritual love. Thank you indeed Zia, for taking the time to read and such great revie.. read more
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

I am glad to hear it. It is my pleasure to read and review and you are welcome, Sil.
Best wis.. read more

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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