Poem 33. Two Days

(A Senryu)

I had still two days

The  ember is almost gone

Hear my one last cry.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Commanda Panda]

I'm guessing this is a haiku. A lot of things pop into my head when I read this, but what came to me the most was a vision of a person saying goodbye to a dying loved one. Any writing that would cause a reader to visualize or feel something has hit its mark and done its job. I commend you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Commanda. This is a Senryu, looks like haiku in format but different in theme. Haikus have the common themes like seasons and nature, while senryu discusses emotions, either satirical or ironic.

This is my countdown of getting passive here in WC because school days are now coming. I really love writing but my job needs my full time this school year. I just being active this summer days.

I'm glad you visited again at my page. You are so welcome here. I have already 4 books- compilation/collection of my works here, Enjoy!

[Commanda Panda]

Well, I've learned something new today. Never heard of a Senryu until now. Thanks for the lesson and keep up the good work.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You, too. It's not easy to be on top (Top Writer). It requires more reading-reviewing-writing activities. Keep it up!

[Ency Bearis]

This is a perfect Senryu, nice job.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, my mentor. I am expecting that you would not hesitate to tell me when I am on the wrong track. I am thankful I found you in this site, Sir Ency.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

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