Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[Emily B]

so glad you're happy

[Calypso]

Very sweet. We all need someone in our life who cares as much.

[ब्र&#..]

well written :)

[Timtim]

This is a very sweet poem...

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is truly beautiful! it reminds me of the way i feel about my best friend!

[SpokenWord]

Yes embrace the feeling of being happy and don't question it, just experience it for what ever it is in the moment. Too often we over think and our minds are masters at imagination that often runs wild without the controls of reality to ground it. Very nice write.

[Julie Beth]

i think that this is really sweet you did a great job on this i loved it :D

[Amy Bumpas]

Cute picture that goes with this...we all need someone special
in our lives, and it's so hard to find that. This poem is cute,
innocent.

[?]

Wonderful sentiments. Just so sweet and lovely,
Very good

[Jeff]

Besides the grammar issues, it was a very well written piece.