I need someone...

I need someone to care for me,

Erasing all my sadness

My inner beauty who can see.

I need someone to make me smile,

Wiping all my tears

Who’d remove everything fragile.

I need someone to be my support,

Carrying me along

Who’d not lie a single sort.

I need someone to hold me tight,

Being out of fear

Who’d make everything alright.

I need someone to sing me a beautiful song,

Sprouting plant of happiness

Who’d never let me go wrong.

I want someone to make my wishes come true,

Blushing on my name

Who’d fight to rescue.

I want someone to be with me forever,

Hoping for the best

Who’d intend to endeavor…

Author's Note

When one feels extremely lonely....
The picture doesn't match the verse though...

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

It's what so many of us are looking for. I hope you find it one day. :)
Your picture is adorable. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Hope so... thank you.... : )

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Be on writerscafe and you'll never be alone for sure. Nice work.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks a lot dear... very true...
u all make me feel great!!!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Told you! true friends are always eager to help each other :)

[D]

Everyone needs someone special, a soulmate. I'd gladly be yours :) but I'm afraid we both have someone else waiting.
Though I'll be your friend, and read your writing :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

honest and straight from the heart...........
we all long for such companion........
in time.......with luck.......sooner or later we stumble upon such idiots.......
you will too......
very well written.....
i liked it!!! :) :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks dear for your time reading....
I am glad and yes you are right... : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

most welcome...........!!!! :) :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

Lovely. You are so young but you have what it takes to be a wonderful poetess. These are thoughts that every lonely person can associate with and the beauty of a poem is when the reader feels that you have translated their feelings in words.
Lines 6, 9 and 11 somehow stop the smooth flow of your thoughts.
Nicely written.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the warm review sir, thanks once again... I will keep all your suggestions in mind while writing next time...

[Sapientiam]

It seems like you want the perfect person in your life... I will say, though, that some people cannot fulfill these wishes, like never lying. That's not to say that there's no one in the world who would certainly try to be perfect. With that effort to become the person you love, it truly shows that they cherish you... Hopefully, your loneliness can be eased. I know I can't do much about that... -laughs-

Anyways, great job...!

[Anindita Janhabee]

wow, thanks for the sweet review dear...

[Nwang]

Ah longing....the pain within every heart and a catalyst for most poems. This one is good, the reader can feel your longing from the lines you have written. Nicely written.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the warm words dear..