good morning

the simplest of things.

good morning
it's all he needs to say
simple --
"I am thinking of you"
he denies it
he hides it
but he admits it
every day
with two words
he's always the first to say

Reviews

[Ruth]

Simple and meaningful...and a give away :) x

[Vidya Bacchus]

I have come to the conclusion in all my wisdom (don't ask lol) that the simplest things mean the most sometimes :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I am sure you are very wise. Thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Sometimes all you need are the simple things and new beginnings. Every morning is a new day to start over fresh. Love it. xo (:

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. Had to claw my way out of that hole, it was damned dark in there.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the simple things in life...and love is really clear and simple when it comes down to it...often much is said that isn't said.
there are many ways to say "i love you"---and sometimes the actual words are hard to say, so we express them in actions and in other words.

[Lyn Anderson]

So true, my friend, so true.

[Bright Ocean Star]

The question is....are you thinking of him? This poem reminds me of a dance between two mimes who can't speak to each other, so they dance around each other nervously not sure how exactly to communicate. Nice write, KLG!

[Lyn Anderson]

unquestionably the question.:) Thanks for stopping by.

[m.s.early]

I love the schema of this piece. It is sweet and so affectionate. It captures a paradox that so many can relate to. Great work :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you sir. I was wallowing in the dark for so long I had to come up for air.

[Sami Khalil]

In the simplest things we can feel and write volumes in our perception of the simple greeting.Excellent.....:)....................

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thanks Sami, for your lovely review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..........................

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I believe the simplest expressions of our feeling are the most honest. Nice wording.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. Me too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.