a short

a short

 

 

ripe for folly

smitten with caustic love

heart accrues bruises

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/17/23

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

So easy to stumble when not paying attention.

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, so easy...
thank you, Winston
j.

[Fran Marie]

much happiness and pain abides when it comes
to matters of the heart, two sides of the coin ..
a gamble taken
in love' s tricky game..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very tricky...thank you, Fran Marie,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

That’s what can happen when you open your heart to love. There are no guarantees and the risk is always there for bruises or even worse. Brevity here which literally packs a punch in its sadness J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Chris,
thank you,
j.

[willweb]

Sadly, a heart in love does not come with a warranty.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no warranty,
thank you, will,
j.

[Stella Armour]

well, it's how we learn Jacob..... once bitten twice shy hopefully.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Stella,
j.

[Andrew John]

Oh, yes. Bruises indeed. Not so bruising to read your usually enjoyable stuff, though, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Andrew,
j.

[Shy Joe]

As an apple caressed in the palm, naive for affection, bled juice and skin from heartaches bite. It's as if we ask to be fruit thrown to the ground. For a few bliss moments, it's worth it. Never sour Jacob. Thank you for such great writes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Shy,
j.