Chapter 1: Where It All Began, And Begins...

Chapter 1: Where It All Began, And Begins...

A Chapter by ewest1220
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He remembered this place. Like an almost non-existant dream...

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Chapter 1: “Where it all began, and begins...”


A young man approached the ruins of a small town. It was a bright warm day, the sun directly overhead. The town had been burned to the ground by an army of thousands, his master had told him. They had come to kill one of the damned but instead took hundreds of innocent lives in their wake.


He remembered this place. Like an almost non-existent dream. He pondered this feeling for but a second, then resumed his investigation.


As he walked through the debris and charred human remains he spotted what appeared to be a main road. He walked down it for a short bit and noticed something odd. An inn almost untouched by the surrounding violence was sitting at the end of the road. An eerie feel emanating from it's wooden walls.


Issak pulled back his hood slowly and stared at the forgotten building. His master had told him about this building. He had told Issak that the events that occurred here had resulted in him being sent to his master's school. But he couldn't help but think that there was something more to the story. Something his master had “forgotten” to say.


Issak stood around six feet tall, his eyes had faded to a deep dark brown but still shone that vivid blue every time he had one of his “episodes.” He wore a brown leather jacket, two long daggers lay sheathed within its folds. On his belt he had another weapon sheathed. A sword, nearly as long as he was tall. The blade was razor thin, straight, and single edged it was as unique as it was deadly for the metal was such that it did not break or shatter.


He reached down, his brown hair blowing in the breeze, and withdrew the long, thin sword from it's sheath. Gripping the blade in both hands he began to practice. He had spent 18 long years learning the art of the sword and he was not about to let himself forget how to use it. Especially considering all that he was.


Suddenly his mind fogged. His eyesight changed, a bright blue aura obscuring his vision. His body shook, and he felt his soul shatter as his power cam rushing to the surface. He opened his mouth to scream but fire filled it instead. The inferno blazed within his chest as his mind raced. And just as suddenly as the pain began, it ended. Gasping for air he watched in horror as the air around him ignited and the entire town exploded in a mass of fire and wind.


Issak stood there, exhausted by his loss of control. Leaning on his blade for support he peered around to see what had he had done.


The explosion had been much more powerful this time. What little remained of the town had been blown away into the surrounding hillside. Trees rent asunder by pieces of building and miscellaneous rubble that now littered the countryside.


“At least there wasn't anybody around,” he though miserably. “Nobody for me to kill...”


As if in answer to his statement he suddenly heard the desperate shriek of a woman in the distance. “Help me! Somebody! Please help me!”


“No!” Issak thought furiously as he sheathed his blade and broke into a dead run.


Issak sped along the path towards the voice. Her cries for help muffled by the obvious sound of a violent struggle.


Knowing full well the urgency of the situation Issak loosened his hold on the power. It radiated within him like a massive orb trapped in his chest. The power from the orb seeped into the rest of his body enhancing his strength, and most importantly, his speed.


He thundered along the path, an avalanche of death awaited. Yearning to be released on the unsuspecting rogues. He reached within himself, calling on the power to give life to the wind and leapt into the air. The force of the wind hurled him into the sky like a cannonball. And as he reached the peak of his jump he smiled softly. The avalanche was falling quickly on his unsuspecting prey. He unsheathed his blade and plunged toward his new victim. An almost sinister laugh lingering behind the force of his falling wrath.



© 2012 ewest1220


Author's Note

ewest1220
Alright this was copied straight from a written page so there may be typos. Please let me know where I can expand, what questions are unanswered or, really, any input you have on this book this has been a long time in the making. I have the entire book written I just need to translate it to text. Thank you guys so much for reading and for your support you guys are awesome!

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this story is so thrilling and interesting.making you to stick to it till the very end.i really liked this character .i don't know but i imagined him like "Clod" of Final Fantasy..he's totally coollll!!!!!!!!!....i'm so excited to read further........well.i can surely say one thing about it.....it would be a great supernatural story for me.........great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Awesome! I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for reading Atiba Sheikh!



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Wow, this chapter is so amazing and wonderful.
Excellent job!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Really like the ending on this one. I'm now frustrated and intrigued by the twist in the story!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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StephMichelle

11 Years Ago

I don't mind at all! I guess because I wanted Issak to investigate the inn and discover what happen.. read more
ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Very interesting! These are the feelings of conflict that the character himself struggles with. I .. read more
StephMichelle

11 Years Ago

Sure thing! And I'm looking forward to reading more:)
Cliff Hanger! Everybody is using these lately but I love it! I'll defianty read more!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luv2dream

11 Years Ago

Wow. Even I don't do that. Give me a minute though I'm going to try!
luv2dream

11 Years Ago

52!
ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Nice!
This Issak; such a force to be reckoned with! I don't think it wise for any mere mortal being to upset him. The brevity of this chapter does not seem to deter my interest in the slightest as to what comes next rather, it enhances it. The characterizations are vividly portrayed. Some components are vague, but I suspect that this is intentional so as not to give away too much too soon. Captivating and mesmerizing read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Wow! I'm really glad you enjoyed this this is all just a matter of converting writing to text so I'.. read more
Dean Kuch®

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. It was my pleasure...
ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Mine as well!
A short chapter. A lot of serious events in the chapter. Burning of city and meeting the sinister character. I look forward to see where you are taking this tale. Thank you for the excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Well I do hope you enjoy where it goes! Hey Coyote thank you so much for reading it's always a plea.. read more
first line you should probably take the d out of sund because i dont think thats a word:P
"was tall, perfectly stright, razor" stright should be srtaight?
"He had spend 18 long years learning the art of the sword..." Spend should be Spent... it sounds better.
"and he felt his soul shatter as his power cam rushing to the surface" cam should be came
"Leaning on his blad for support he peered" Blad should be blade
"Threes rent assunder by pieces of building and miscelanious rubble that now littered the countryside" I dont know what 'threes rent' is...
"The power fom the orb seeped" Forgot the r in from

Wow the end was a dark twist like most of your work! i thought he was gonna save her to tell the truth lol but nope be kills her^_^ wow i never thought id be cheery about something like that:P anyways interesting story so far:) looking forward to reading more!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

11 Years Ago

You'll see in the next chapter it isn't quite what you think it is :) and thanks for helping me w/ .. read more
ewest1220

11 Years Ago

Annd fixed! Thank you so much for the help!

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