Left to be Desired
A Book by Jamie Lee
 Bronne is an aspiring writer living in Chicago with the love of his life, Eva. He's desperate to make change, but finds himself held back by Eva's cryptic and secretive life.  © 2010 Jamie Lee
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I'm looking for advice on all aspects of this story. Unless the grammar is horrendous, I'd prefer if that isn't focused on so much as the plot, the dialogue, the structure... etc.
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Keep going on this girl! Don't make the plot too thick though.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on December 17, 2010
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Jamie LeeSanta Cruz, CA
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I'm just a girl trying to make it as a writer. I write what I know, which isn't a lot, but I am learning. 2011 is all about bettering myself as a writer, and I'll be putting every effort into achievin.. more..
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