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A Chapter by marie
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derp hope this makes up for me forgetting

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“now off to the elders circle.”

she murmured to herself dictating her every move not giving herself the chance to back out of her plan. 

“now you have to move the horse.”

she told herself, her movements becoming more and more like a well-trained dog. she spurred the mare into the heart of the city keeping to the backroads avoiding as many people’s stares as she could. 



© 2012 marie


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good going...


Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
I really can visualize her racing off on the back roads here without and description of the town. Still captivated at even at this point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

thank you i am so glad you like it:)
Keep writing please! I want to know the outcome of her plan. =3 If what I think her plan is, is correct. She's going to set fire to the...elders circle? When do you think the next chapter will be up?

Posted 11 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

derp give me minute...i have this all written out on my computer:)
Ashley G.

11 Years Ago

Yay!
marie

11 Years Ago

there ya go its up:)

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