Kingdom of Dreams

Kingdom of Dreams

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Kind of dreamy ;p

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A blanket of stars 

on an ebony sky,

 

freshly mown grass 

on a bright rainy day

 

a carpet of - half made promises.

 

I walk on, miles and miles 

towards the sound 

of your distant roar,

 

echoing; tempting me forward --

 

I reach out 

to the confines 

of where we built our

 

 kingdom ~ of dreams.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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You are talented my friend, and Your talent shines here so brightly! You know what You are writing, and how to write it to turn it to not just beautiful poem, but to a one filled with emotions dripping from Your words, sometimes like drizzle, sometimes like rain...

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you again for your lovely words, Light. I'm humbled at your appreciation. :)
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Kingdom of dreams..

A very sweet poem, my dear. I really missed your poems. Can't wait to talk to you soon!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, Jess! I miss ya too. Will pm soon xx
Amazing use of words and thoughts. Your good description made me feel and understand the words. Outstanding words and thoughts my friend.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Coyote. I appreciate your words here (:
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
Beautiful and ethereal, I like the way you have presented your thoughts into a journey ending with your "Kingdom of dreams".
Well thought out and the lines flow beautifully into romantic images :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here and for liking. I appreciate it :))
You are talented my friend, and Your talent shines here so brightly! You know what You are writing, and how to write it to turn it to not just beautiful poem, but to a one filled with emotions dripping from Your words, sometimes like drizzle, sometimes like rain...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you again for your lovely words, Light. I'm humbled at your appreciation. :)
And that'.. read more
Yet another experiment that's taken off very beautifully -even tho' a touch sad.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

I think most beautiful things have sad endings...
Thank you for your words here, Emma. Always.. read more
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Ty
Leaving the reader afloat. Great piece.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Ty 😊
This is a pleasant little bit of experimentation with imagery you've written. I've done something like this before, years ago. It's good for the brain, that's for sure. Keep up the good work. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating. Glad you like it :))
metaphorically beautiful....the kingdoms both literal and figurative...i like the use of "confines" because here the term has such a positive connotation...

j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Jacob. 😊
the dreamy imagery is captivating, nice write

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this write 😊
Beautifully written, with passionate nuances shown, and kept, way deep inside.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your words. I appreciate it 😊
a112yearoldman

4 Months Ago

You are so welcome!

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