Prologue/Chapter 1: *untitled currently*

Ok in case u havent figured this out...i pretty much have no plan for how this story will pan out just a basic idea, ending, a couple scenes some facts. im just gonna write what comes~

I was always a strange kid growing up. The odd one out. The one with the funny accent and creepy hunches that were never wrong. But I didn't care, I wasn't one to be phased by the ideas of young kids who could barely write a sentence in the second grade. I was used to it, used to being ostracized, and it was just my nature to blow it off and make some smart assed comment in response.

I developed a reputation for having a slightly sarcastic tone to my voice one that was hidden behind my light southern accent, an accent that never really went away even after ten years of living in California. And I guess I looked like i was some what of an intellectual with my apparent perpetual distant look like i was thinking intently about something and just a hint of a frown like the answer was just beyond my grasp. That was me, a mix of subtly nuances, keeping everyone on their toes  letting the physical eye see one thing but allowing the subconscious to see something completely different.

That was all there was to me really. I was an outcast and I only had one friend, Volt (her real name was Vanessa), and at the time my life was complete. I was content, and I didn’t have any desire or will to change any of it. Of course though change is unavoidable and in the end it will catch up with you whether you like it or not, but when it does be ready cause there’s a high chance you won’t like what will unfold.

I know I didn’t, but I long ago accepted that there where some things I couldn’t change, even if the future did unravel itself in my eyes.

My name is Dare. And this is the beginning of the end.

Author's Note

Please be Nice :3 but constructive

Reviews

[Hotaru]

wow... I think it`s a very interesting introduction and the way you introduce the character... is very nicey nice :))

- sugoi! :D

[Tsukin Archangel]

thanks~ and YES I KNOW WHAT THAT LAST WORD MEANS lol *feels so proud*

[Hotaru]

ahehehe... :DD

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol i know im such a dork

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good introduction. I like the description of the main character. The education and the attitude made the character interesting. I will keep reading the story. A excellent introduction.
Coyote

[Tsukin Archangel]

sweet thanks :3 Glad it hooked you :3

[Coyote Poetry]

I will come back tonight and read the complete story. Thank you for sharing.

[Tsukin Archangel]

oooo cant wait~ hope i keep your interest

[SmileBig :)]

Pretty cool :) I have no time to do so now, but I'll have to read on. It seems interesting :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

sweet >;3 i'll look forward to ur reviews n stuff lol glad u liked it~

[Cole Hayley]

Very well done, reminds be alot of Catcher in the Rye. Very honest, and creepy, sending shivers up my spine. Well done my friend, i look forward to reading more.

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol thats interesting i hadnt thought it was like that at all really....i guess mayb a little minus the supernatural aspect, and thanks glad u liked and yeah theres plenty to the uhm right -->

[laura]

This is freaking great omg awesomeness. So going to read more err radar phone thingy's grr. If grammars problematic phone did it. Not me :) anyway back to story claps. This is great keep it up. Kudos'.

[selkietales]

I like it, I'm gonna keep reading after I post this :)
"a mix of subtly nuances" => subtle
"Of course though change is unavoidable and in the end it will catch up with you whether you like it or not, but when it does be ready cause there’s a high chance you won’t like what will unfold."=> "though" is unnecessary and it's because not cause.
There's some other little things, but whatever.

[JadeForever]

OOH CREEPY...i like it!!! good hook..