I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Lisasview]

Quite relatable... being honest with ones feelings and trusting that the person you are pouring your heart out too is someone you can trust can be q

[Franky]

Wow. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I appreciate it greatly.

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome...
lisa

[Franky]

I am very glad you took the time to read and reflect your thoughts. You are very encouraging. 😀

[Lisasview]

I truly believe that writers ~ poets need to encourage other writers ~ poets to work on their words..
Lisa

[Ioana Mihai]

Lovely poem!
Love is beautiful anyway…. Sweet and bitter like a dark chocolate… still a blessing to be able to love. As long as we live we shall love

[Franky]

What a wonderful comment. Thank you from my heart. ❤️‍🩹

[Ioana Mihai]

Welcome, from the heart as well
Your poem inspired my words, your creation keeps creating into the readers new emotions and metaphors ❤️

[Franky]

You are very kind. Thank you.my new friend.

[Susan 🦋]

Love and the tenderhearted. Sigh. Those complications can really damage a soul, but always choose to love. :)

[Franky]

You are very kind Susan. Thank you.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

You can pour the love out of your heart and be drowned by it. Others are not always capable of receiving it. Thankfully, it is like a river and returns to its source - you. You can love yourself until it's right to love another. You have expressed your emotions very well in this poem, and it is a poem to which we can all relate. Well done.

[Franky]

Thank you so much Linda. I love your writing so I feel really good about this great comment.

[Kelly Scheppers]

When you're in love with someone, you have a tendency to hesitate what so badly wants to be spoken. We're always second guessing ourselves or over analyzing words and feelings that get stuck in our throat. I'd say take a chance. Love is worth the leap, the faith!

[Lilly]

Love can come with many complications, but hopefully they end up being worth it!
I feel there is so much longing, but also conflicting emotions in this. Craving, wishing, waiting for someone, but also a feeling that timing wasn't right, or something is in the way stopping anything from happening.
Nice poem :)

[Franky]

Thanks so much. This one ended badly though. I threw caution to the wind, expressed my feelings, and was shot down. But, that's life.

[Franky]

But actually......things worked out for the better. Lol

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lost love but I love in this write it's love never had.
Thank you for sharing

[Franky]

Thank you, and how very true.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Your welcome for an excellent write

[Red Brick Keshner]

If love fuelled courage then stories would have peaked and summited over and over again, it is the half of bravery's possibilities that gives us hope.

[Franky]

Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful comment.

[Scott Kris]

It is a game for the brave indeed. For all who know any of love’s truth know enough to own a healthy fear… Yet it grows into a respect and we take to the battle not without fear, because we know the fight is worth the struggle.

Fun read. Thank you for sharing.

Scott.

[Franky]

Thank you Scott. That means a lot. I appreciate it.

[Aura]

Love is so complex, as we are unsure of how the other person would react to our confession if it was a crush. The line "I do wonder" is such a great one, as I interpret it as this person being imaginative of all of Scenarios in this poem and what could happen if it became reality, what would the other person do or say? I enjoyed reading this, the title "I do wonder" is a good one, conveys imagination

[Franky]

Thank you so much! This is describing a woman who i fell very much in love with.....although neither of us was free at the time. They were powerful feelings....but to no avail. It turns out that i was much better off.

[Aura]

I see, sometimes love doesn't last for a reason.