I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Tina]

Sweet poem, I'd say take a chance. Regret it not fun.

[Franky]

Well.....I did take the chance. This was a really life situation. But it didn't end the way I wanted. 😬

[Tina]

Sorry about that

[Suzanne Sonderleigh]

Lovely poem. I like the rhythm of the words. It’s easy to see you write with much emotion…straight from your heart in this poem. Great write!

[Franky]

Thank you so much Suzanne.

[NotUsinganymore]

I like the lingering of love the poem has. It gave a nice touch of sadness to it.

[Franky]

Thank you so much!

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome! Please check out my poem too!

[Azifwecare]

I can relate to this. Oh and the internal torture. I was afraid if I said anything... One of those damned if you do/don't situations. Loved the poem my friend.

[Franky]

You are awesome for reading this and commenting. I liked writing this, but im not great at these writes. Lol

[Azifwecare]

It's important to say what you want to say or write it for that matter. Better than bottling it up inside. You don't have to be "great" I honestly think when people see it they will gravitate to it or not, and it's ok if they don't. Remember to write for you. Not to please the crowd.

[Unspoken poet]

Such a lovely write here, Love the rhyme scheme

[Franky]

thank you dear. You are very kind. 😀

[SheIsMe]

I completely understand this one on so many levels. It's a tortured but blissful thing. One that you can't bear to lose. You expressed it well and the emotion in this piece is real.

[Franky]

Thank you so much. This is actually something I wrote 15 yrs ago. I was very much in love, but it's a good thing that things didn't work out. She was not what I thought she was.

[Samuel Dickens]

What Margie said. Looking back at my own life, I have to ask myself whether a guy's intense desire for a woman is really a good thing or not. In this well-penned poem, it's obvious that someone has a really bad case of it. I want him to succeed, to be brought beside her with flowers, birds flittering and an angel choir. Sadly, I know that might not happen. Still, we will have hope.

[Franky]

Thank you Sam. I am very pleased you took the time to read this. I wrote this about 15 years ago. I have changed much in that time in many ways.

Have a wonderful weekend.

[Seriana]

Lovely write. What caught me immediately was the font color. You don't see red much for that. It brought a presence of the speakers voice. I liked the short, rhymed lines.
Nicely done!

[Franky]

You are kind... This means a lot since you are pretty talented. Thanks! I'm just learning.

[VJWild]

I can relate to this a thousand percent. Simple and to the point. Thoughts always racing and this says it all!

[Franky]

You are so kind! Thank you dear.

[wordman]

we should n have to wonder,but we do,good write

[Franky]

You are right. Thxnk for reading!

[wordman]

you`re welcome