Night of Pain

For those who cause their selves pain. This is just for y'all. Enjoy my fellow writers.

Lay in your bed you wretch
Floating in your own dismay
No!
A knife in your hand
Gun to your head
Your choice lies in your mind
Pain lurking inside your body
Do you try to hurt yourself?
Here you lay in your own pity
Just end it if you are so horrid
Just stop your own stupidity
The night casts your blanket
You decide your choice
Your fate lies in your own hand
One that barres lies, secrets, and chaos
Self wallowing fool
Why 'cause your own pain?

Author's Note

Put yourself in the position of the person who is told their friend, sibling, etc. is causing pain to their selves before you read this.

Reviews

[♥ Kinnixk]

The message is conflicting but nonetheless convincing. In the middle kinda made it sound like what the bullies would say to the victim and I think of it as the thoughts of a depressed person on the verge of suicide going over what their friendly peers say and the bullies' taunts and then back into common sense. The last two lines were very powerful.
"Self wallowing fool
Why cause your own pain?"
100/100

[Luna Kusan]

I d-deeply appriciate th-that.

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right, some people just tend to think that the whole world hates them or vice versa telling that the world hates another person. They are bringing the poison to their own veins, creating a pain to complain about. Good going here and I totally agree with what you state here~!
100/100

[FayteX]

Scary how accurate this is... I'm not one for dark poems >.< But this one hit me right in the feelings >.< Good job ^^