You Hurt Me

You Hurt Me

A Chapter by Luna Kusan

You don't know anything about me

Do you think you own me?

You want to lie about me.

Ignore me for all I care!

I miss you, but I've lost you.

It hurts to like you.

I hurts to want to be with you

But not wanting to be with you

Am I the one to blame?

I want to be your's

But I dont want you to own me

I am not an animal that you can tame and train

Learn to be a real friend instead of a fraud!

I miss you...But you are my undoing



© 2013 Luna Kusan


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'(It) hurts to want to be with you'
Powerful. The eighth line shifts rhythm slighlty, but it's a pure, emotive piece.

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