Letting it go

I'm letting it go

Trying to start a new

Giving up all the old

All I am is a hollow shell

 

You took away most of me

I can't handle the pain

So here is a chance

to let it all go

 

I gave my heart to you

and that was a mistake

you broke it to pieces

so here i am

 

trying to let it go

seeing you kills me

watching your laughter

is taunting

 

so here i go

trying again

to let go

of the past

 

(c) Luna Kusan

Reviews

[FayteX]

Moving on Is a painful and long experience. But you can only move on by two ways, choosing to forget, and choosing to forgive. What you do is your choice. Everyone goes through this, and this is so true. Nice Poem Luna ^^ really brings out the emotions

[Rhianne Ney]

A sad one, but hey, dude, you're capable of picking up the broken pieces of yourself and move on. I just know that you can do that (: I know that time will be there for you also and that's something that you're blessed off. Life is a series of uptowns and downtowns but we can always be happy (:

Great poem and keep writing!

100/100