Her World Of Fantasies

Her World Of Fantasies

A Book by Blue Ivory


© 2013 Blue Ivory


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Just finished chapter 10. Interesting story. I'm curious as to what happened to Melissa's father. But I like the way the story is developing with her becoming more open. Maybe new faces in the house will raise her mother's spirits and she will begin to get better. I thoroughly enjoyed it though and at no point due to lack of grammar skill or interest did I decide to stop reading. I look forward to seeing what else you have.
Cheers

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the lovely review :D I love receiving feedback from my readers. Updating won't.. read more



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Finished! This was amazing, I loved your description in each chapter, you had me intrigued with every chapter, I wanted to read more and more!

Great job, you've really done an amazing job! :)

~ Noodle.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :D I'll write more soon and then let you know okay? :3
s y e

8 Years Ago

Sounds good to me! C:

Pleasure.
Just finished chapter 10. Interesting story. I'm curious as to what happened to Melissa's father. But I like the way the story is developing with her becoming more open. Maybe new faces in the house will raise her mother's spirits and she will begin to get better. I thoroughly enjoyed it though and at no point due to lack of grammar skill or interest did I decide to stop reading. I look forward to seeing what else you have.
Cheers

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the lovely review :D I love receiving feedback from my readers. Updating won't.. read more
So beautiful and dream like and surreal yet very powerful and clear at the same time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Marvelous description, Siren. The aura of poverty came through clearly and with that touch of despair it should have for the reader. This is a fine work and I want to see where it goes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
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Sid
Great uplifting story, to be able to enjoy yourself in any kind of situation is important and the fact is many of poorer people might be the happier. Very good write this, i like it!!Well done!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :$
It always takes my breath away when a short story can have such a powerful punch in meaning.. This is wonderful and full thoughtful inspiration..xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm glad you think so!
Nice short piece and you give a rich insight into 'the life of', which makes me think this could be longer, could be a book, I enjoyed this very much, good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh

9 Years Ago

Lol, but keep going please, its good
Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

I'll try! :) Nice to get encouragement. I normally don't write short stories. So wasn't that confide.. read more
Leigh

9 Years Ago

My pleasure
An intriguing slice of life; nicely styled and well expressed.
You wail, Siren!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In some form we all create our own reality, but eventually it smashes into the walls erected by those around us.

I enjoyed the story, there are a few grammatical problems, and sentences that are a little awkward, but overall a great job. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) And what I meant was, she flipped the switch for the light, but it didn't turn .. read more
Mark

9 Years Ago

I'd write 'The electricity bill hadn't been paid." and leave it at that, the additional words just m.. read more
Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

I kinda felt that way too. I appreciate your opinion. Thank you!
Sometime we learn to accept less and enjoy the small things. I like the thoughts and the description of the location. A powerful tale. I like the ending a lot. Thank you for the excellent story.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

9 Years Ago

Glad you liked it!

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