Going Home

Going Home

A Chapter by Storyteller of Dimensions

A poem that I made again listening to a song, but this time it's related to a novel I'm writing. Something that probable won't never happen there.


After all hardships


after all the sufferings

after all those losses

after all that pain


the time has come

one last step

one last check


after our long exile

we are going back

to the most beautiful of all places -



© 2012 Storyteller of Dimensions

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this made my day....wonderful.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago

Oh Man!!! Gee.... That is so true... that happened to me this summer when i finally was able to go for 4 months back to my country, after (today, actually) 10 years of being in the US... even though i hadnt been there in 10 years, the moment i got out of the plane, i was "Home". And was able to get back to life as "normal". It did however meant even more hardship and losses while i was there, but... it was home, and it made it easier. Then... the story repeated itself when it was time to come back to the US... then, before landing i wrote in my journal that i was going back "home". I really, really liked this. =) Thank you for writing it..

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Posted 12 Years Ago

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Tags: struggle for balance, stars, universe, exile, home
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