I see

from a distance

I see
and I want
him near
even if
he is
busy
with someone
else
I see
do you
see me?
Of course
you do.
And will
you stop by?
perhaps today
again
the afters
perhaps
not
but I see
and so
does he

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting piece...that thought of someone who is attached, but we don't care, we are attracted...and then wondering if the feeling is mutual...

and if it is...what chance that person will stop by despite already being committed to someone else.

well there is always that fantasy.

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting perspective. In fact, the subject of this piece belongs to no one, and everyone, all at the same time :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh I can feel the longing in your verse, When we want someone bad enough we would do anything just to get one moment of their attention.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome and then some :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I am sure he couldn't help but to see...and then the question is ...will he? That time left waiting and wondering...in suspence, kind of makes the heart flutter. There is no fulfillment that is not made sweeter for the prolonging of desire...or at least that is what they say. Some words are written just for those who we want to see them, but I couldn't let this intriguing write go with out saying how awesome it was to stumble upon it tonight. Wonderful work as always.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, as always appreciate your review.