ha ha ha I had to do it. This has been modified slightly in keeping with the foodie theme, thanks Delmar, it's different than what I said, different that what you suggested, and better, I think than both of us thought.
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Bahaha! Oh, this was good. I love this one, KL! The word use here and the imagery - fantastic! This made my day. Going into my favs. Thank you, dear! xo :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Awesome. As I tell everyone, Delmar set me straight on the path to a perfect foodie metaphor.
A very nice ending to the poem. I like the way you used the words. Made the ending perfect. No weakness in the outstanding and fun poem to read.
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Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much. I owe the perfect foodie metaphor to Delmar, who pointed out how this poem could be .. read moreThanks so much. I owe the perfect foodie metaphor to Delmar, who pointed out how this poem could be better.
Love the foodie theme....the metaphor is wonderful! Selfish with a cherry on top....love it! So clever. Lydi**
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks Lydi - the foodie theme throughout is thanks to Delmar Cooper, I had a couple of other words .. read moreThanks Lydi - the foodie theme throughout is thanks to Delmar Cooper, I had a couple of other words in there, mixing metaphors and such, and he set me straight to a better poem.
Well at least you got a cherry out of the deal. Fiesty KLGoode and can I say that this was KL good? I've wanted to say that since I met you. I enjoyed this one today, even if it did make my stomach queasy.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
That's funny, thanks, and I did like this one myself, especially after Delmar Cooper helped me out w.. read moreThat's funny, thanks, and I did like this one myself, especially after Delmar Cooper helped me out with a few things. I highly recommend his stuff.
Well I certainly hope he finally took notice when he found himself wearing a soggy shoe. Awful to have made such a lovely gesture and have him just walk away... Very nicely done!
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