Because I love you.

Because I love you.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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I say I am okay.

I keep my real emotions
hidden away.

I smile and laugh with
my friends, even though
its all a lie. 

Inside, I am dying slowly.

Inside, I am ripping myself
apart every day.

On the inside, I am crying. 

I mentally abuse myself
to keep you safe.

I don't want to.

You don't want me to. 

But I do it because I
love you. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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Naomi Roseღ
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This isn't bad. It is beautifully written and it is a good poem.
It's really sad
100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sad:S Good that we have hope!

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This really isn't bad! This is great and many people can relate to this, keep up the awesome work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is not bad! Stop saying your work is bad when it's clearly immense! I can relate to it, and I'm sure many others can! So just chill :P your work is amazing :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


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TJ
i think this is really good! it seems to have a somewhat strange structure but i really like the emotoin behind this and the message! so many ppl, especially young women, can relate to things and feelings like these. i'm sure they feel this is almost speaking to them

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a beautiful poem, and very elegant. Don't insult your writing. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love is just a tricky thing in general, one does so many things in the name of love and yet they sometimes aren't the right things to do. A touching piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


This isn't bad, I love it. But I agree with Derek, you deserve better. So I know I've said this before...and you've probably got a million better people, but if you ever need to talk or just vent then I'm here (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This isn't bad, I love it. But I agree with Derek, you deserve better. So I know I've said this before...and you've probably got a million better people, but if you ever need to talk or just vent then I'm here (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This isn't bad, I love it. But I agree with Derek, you deserve better. So I know I've said this before...and you've probably got a million better people, but if you ever need to talk or just vent then I'm here (:

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Tags: Depression, poetry, cutting, mental abuse, heart break, short

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