Poem to Writer

Thanks for not reading...lol :)

Your eyes,
Stare in the skies,
You see a disguise,
You love what you see.

You stare at it in awe,
Watchin it fly close,
You say hey.
You like what you see,
When you look at me,
But will you like it,
When you see it for what it is,
When you see the darkness within,

You tell me, i'm the best friend,
Will you say that, when its my turn to rant?
Will you like me, when i want to die,
But you want to see me fly,
Will you like it, when my heart engulfed in flames, burning for someone else, skyrockets out in the unknown, to find the one i love, again.

You said he's not worth the time,
You say he's not the love of mine.
That it was only a matter of time.
Well, its boring...i mean this line.

Find someone else,
Before you regret meeting me.

Author's Note

A poem to Writer

Reviews

[PANDORA]

Ok, wow, I need a minute. I have stumbled onto something. Holy crap. I read the poem and really liked it and as is my habit I read the other comments before I write my own comment (really bad habit by the way.) Anyway, knowing the facts behind the poem even made me like it more.
Thanks for the read. Sorry for the stalker.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem.
"Will you like me, when i want to die,
But you want to see me fly,
Will you like it, when my heart engulfed in flames, burning for someone else, skyrockets out in the unknown, to find the one i love, again. "
I liked the above lines. The poem went into many directions. Left the reader with something to think about.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Heh...wrote it to a guy who was obsessed with me... Anyways, thanks for the read.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[A writer]

A bit harsh...but rightful. I deserved that. And yes, inside my heart, I will always love you. No matter what. You are awesome, just the way you are!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah...right........................