Heavy metal

My favorite genre of music

Cuts a door into the silence,
Its a strong steel rod,
Shooting lightnings,
A flame from a spark.
An omniscient beautiful woman,
You want something else?
Then stand aside.
A rock sinking in still water,
Black saturday witch dance.
Heavy metal.
New strength,
Fresh blood,
Power flood.
Its an ear bleeding noise,
That makes all nuclear weapons look like toys.
Heavy metal.
An explosion,
A shock wave,
New star born,
The old one killed,
Levels mountains,
Dries up oceans,
Makes my dead heart beat.
Heavy metal.

Author's Note

This aint too good...but whatevs, its up.

Reviews

[A writer]

It aint too good?! you serious? I wish I could say that I wrote this. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) and now seriously... You want it?

[A writer]

Yeah... Well, I want skill to write like you :) not your writes. They are yours.

[RiverRei]

Very good. Definitely is a good description of heavy metal lyrics and what the songs attempt to accomplish lol. Can I be the beautiful woman??? Haha. :P

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah. You can. Lol. Thanks.

[Ben Noah Suri]

I am an old school metal lover and I loved this,

"Its an ear bleeding noise,
That makes all nuclear weapons look like toys"

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much:) come to think of it, then it is.

[sereenaoutloud]

This is really good...i like some heavy metal...not all.. but i love this write it captures the essence of it perfectly! I tend to listen to heavy metal when i just dont want to think, it helps drown out the static!
Oh and love the authors notes made me smile "whatevs, its up" totally nicking it heheh

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much!

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
I am a metal junkie, being a Christian I have been told that I need to
eliminate this music from my life because it is not of God, but I just
haven't been able to part with my metal to this point, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you:) i think somewhere i've heard that there is christian heavy metal too.

[Jamestown]

Yep, I listen to a lot of kill switch engaged
they are all Christians and mostly have a positive message
in there music, but I'm not going to lie one of my favorite artist
is Marlyn Manson and you can imagine the thoughts that are
in the heads of my brethren:(

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah i know. I started with Anthrax.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

That is, if we are talkin abou the english ones.

[Jamestown]

Yep, Anthrax, Slayer, Metallica, and on and on, lol:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

And by the way...people think that music is not of god. Well...if they mean that god wont like it, then they're wrong. I believe that if there is a god then he wont care what you do as long as its not in conflict with the laws he set up for you.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Iron maiden, Megadeath, Judas priest, and lots more

[AaronFreitas]

I love metal... big fan of all rock! Good write!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Me too! wrote two more about rock 'n roll.

[closed]

a great devotional celebrating your favorite kind of music
i like your ideas IM

you're good at thinking of unique things to write about

and kudos my friend, for continuing to branch out from your previous style


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you very much.