Vain Persuasion

Read very carefully and see the message. I highly recommend you read this 2 or 3 times to see the whole picture. I believe this is my best writing. Please share this. (READ COLORS TOGETHER.)

The rose is blue

You know it's not true.

But let's say it were so

Truth or a lie will you know?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There is a right;

Many are the differences in one's sight.

Will you believe the wave is coming

Or will you be seduced by a lies numbing?

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[JenLyn]

I had to read it several times because the picture breaking it up distracted me but it's good, powerful and deep write and I really like how you used the colors for words it brought more to the poem I think. Great write! Keep it up! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Th poem is very good. I had to read many times. You create a powerful poem with a purpose. Thank you.
Coyote

[Kinsey]

This is a really brilliant way of writing poetry. I love how the colors and images you've chosen add an extra layer of meaning (or enhance the meaning that is already there, if you will). Well done!

[Claudia]

I'm really glad you sent me a read request for this, because it's really god! Way to go. :D

[Ice QueenJen]

I love the aide of the visual pictures- it gets you thinking. And like the others, you can re-read this many times and find something new. And your colour choice is fantastic, again making a part of the brain work, like an artistic trick. Left side shift to the right side of the brain- which is hard for me since I have had part of my right side cut out. (to long to get into now) but you are a great writer, and I love this music, very soothing to the soul.

[S.W.]

I like this poem. The more you read it the more you can actually re-read into different messages that it has inside of it. Real good.

[Sin]

It's like a literary puzzle XD Great work, I like the line altogether in blue the best, I think. Great work :3

[*Always be Me:)*]

awesome writing. it's very nice. great job! :) keep going!

[~ Otto Girl ~]

nice work this has alot of rhyme. I like it.

[Senseless whatever]

Great write. Simple and yet complex in the underlying meanings. Too often we just go along to get along and thus let the wolves in with the sheep.