Vain Persuasion

Read very carefully and see the message. I highly recommend you read this 2 or 3 times to see the whole picture. I believe this is my best writing. Please share this. (READ COLORS TOGETHER.)

The rose is blue

You know it's not true.

But let's say it were so

Truth or a lie will you know?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There is a right;

Many are the differences in one's sight.

Will you believe the wave is coming

Or will you be seduced by a lies numbing?

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[deeps]

I love this awesome write here, this is amazing.
Lovely font colors as well.

[The High Poet]

Very creative write! I liked it short sweet and to the point. Great use of picture in your work. Keep it up :)

[ChristopherPoet]

This is marvelous creativity, never seen poetry in this form before. Excellent work!

[Frantzuu]

wow, this is different and very interesting :)
great music, and your words are colorful, awesome write. :D

[A.Lee]

I like the way this is written. So many people will stand there and tell you "nope, the rose is blue" because it makes them feel better. The lie is more comforting than the truth so we stubbornly hold to it. Nice job.

[Jordan]

Love the rhyming technique.. Wonderfully written. :)