This wouldn't fit in the description box so... Also, in the 'book,' Creatures will come out of nowhere and we will meet who is coming.... I will probably continue it but I want opinions first! :) I hope you liked it!
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Interesting, but I little bit awkward to read. You should probably describe what they look like earlier on, because putting their descriptions in the middle of the tension wrecks the flow of the drama. Good story, but when you add more and fix up the disjointedness it will be great!
My name is Brynna Wynne Wiley. Aka: BrynnaW. I'm supposed to tell all about myself right here but... I've done that before.
Now, it's just about the writing. more..