A Chapter by Archia

A smile in her eyes, why?


A smile in her eyes, why?

© 2012 Archia

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So open-ended, a I love that about this poem. The first five words set up the story, but the last opened up the situation. There's so many answers to that simple question, and I love the way that then it's the reader's job to wonder, to think about the reason behind the smile in her eyes. Really creative and original. Thanks for submitting this to my contest :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

There is something so stunning when someone smiles with their eyes, almost cunningly

Posted 6 Years Ago

Still looking for the story.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Powerful. That open-end question really sold me.
Wonderful job Archia.

Summer D.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on February 10, 2012
Last Updated on August 13, 2012
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