Catch a Daisy

Ask me to marry you and I’ll refuse, say that you love me and I’ll let you put a ring on my finger.

Reviews

[The XYZ Writer]

Haha, I haven't read from the beginning yet, but it seems to me as if a woman is telling the man to state his feelings for her, and only then will she let him put a ring on her finger and marry her. Ah the meaning you can get out of so few words. Good job Archia. :)

[Priya]

You ooze style in everything you write, even if it is something as short as this! And you know, this is particularly significant in a society such as that I live in, where arranged marriage is traditionally expected..

[Nima M]

Is that supposed to be what the sister said to the brother?

[Octob3r Star]

Perfect ;)

[Abbie]

okay, this seem like a bit more of a poem... but i still think that it is ok.not great, but ok.