You are Interesting?

You are Interesting?

A Chapter by Ethan Paz
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A contrast between pages and life; books and life. Mainly about life but you will get it if you read and not skim over it!

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You are a page (A good page?)                                          

A living chapter (You decide.)                    

Bringing about change. (Right now.)      

 

Some pages are rough (I hate paper cuts.)                                     

Some are smooth

A worthy book you will pursue. (How you write it is up to you.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The pages are written slowly,                           

Success defined by the clock. (Tick, tock, tick tock)

In this world there is no life’s block.

 

A book will be written. (Yes, written)

Lessons learned by your example, (Yes, you. Yes,  I mean you.)

But will people, your book, they want to trample? (No critics!)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Most books have sold zero copies.

They wish editing could be done now. (Click)

Do something just don’t say, “How?”

 

SOLD OUT



© 2010 Ethan Paz


Author's Note

Ethan Paz

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I don't like this write particularly, but who am I? I have been hating all my writings lately.

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This is good! I didn't find it hard to understand at all. I like the way you likened life to a book or a story. Well crafted concept.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good write. Easy to understand and makes a valid point. You are your own story, make it or not it is up to you. I feel the flow of this piece was interrupted with the parentheses though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a wonderful write here,
I like this, turthful write

Posted 14 Years Ago


I have to agree with Alex W.. Although it is a very interesting piece of writing, it's not my type of thing to read. It is very good though, no need to hate/dislike it. I have to say, it is a bit short.. Maybe lengthening it a bit would clarify the point you're trying to make a bit better? I didn't understand that too well, unless that's jsut me..?

Posted 14 Years Ago


All of us write the autobiography of our lives in the pages inscribed with our action and inaction. I like your theme but I would suggest that you have someone read your poem to you as a kind of perception test. You have a talent for writing and I would like to see you write without pictures using powerful words and phrases to leave impressions.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Not sure what your saying, perhaps its all our lives are like books, we are the main character, but perhaps not. It is interesting, none the less.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


An odd piece, not my style I think.

Others will like it, it's just not my type of thing.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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