I Write

I Write

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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because...

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I  write because I want to shout

And yet I cannot speak

I want to tell some things in me

But I feel I am weak

 

I write because I want to open

To make all things so clear

I do not know if one will find

The same sounds that I hear

 

I write because I want to share

The gift that now I keep

To some it maybe ordinary

But  to others it  could be steep

 

I want to write, I want to shout

I want to open and share

I want to reveal, I want to help

To show that I love and care…



© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)
Just a writing exercise...

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When there's something that we want to share we don't just say it with words . We show them what we see and feel and think. Using all our five senses disguise under metaphor and simile. There's a slight difference between telling, writing and showing. But as writer and poet we do all.

So don't just write
what you think and feel.
Take me where you are.
Show me where you've been
Show me how you feel.
Take me there
and
show me why you felt
the words you are writing
here ...

Oh my, I may have created a short piece....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Wow! That's already a short piece, Neil. But sorry, I am not so good in using metaphors. I am jus.. read more
NeiL ArandA

6 Years Ago

Don't sell yourself short again. Your masterpiece " Taking Flight " made the first and last impressi.. read more



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Very meaningful and understandable for the average Joe to understand.I've seen some I require a dictionary to read cause not being familiar with them

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
W R Stowe

5 Years Ago

Your welcome
Yes indeed Dhaye, the pen can be so expressive and transcends beyond the normal realm of the spoken word!

An edifying poetic espousal to the written word !

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed, we write for different reasons. Though i prefer action rather than words, there are times that our pen could best express our love and care. Glad you are back at writing, dhaye. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


"I want to write, I want to shout
I want to open and share"

You are doing that with your readers. I have missed your writings. It has been a while indeed. Excellent...:)........................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When there's something that we want to share we don't just say it with words . We show them what we see and feel and think. Using all our five senses disguise under metaphor and simile. There's a slight difference between telling, writing and showing. But as writer and poet we do all.

So don't just write
what you think and feel.
Take me where you are.
Show me where you've been
Show me how you feel.
Take me there
and
show me why you felt
the words you are writing
here ...

Oh my, I may have created a short piece....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Wow! That's already a short piece, Neil. But sorry, I am not so good in using metaphors. I am jus.. read more
NeiL ArandA

6 Years Ago

Don't sell yourself short again. Your masterpiece " Taking Flight " made the first and last impressi.. read more
but it is an exercise in truth....i write for similar reasons...
it's because i need to...but also to share feelings and let others know that another is going through similar emotions as they.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir J. :)
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Pax
"then just write, write whatever your heart desires to create..."

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Kuha ka lang sa ref. Hehe. Libre yan. Bahala ka na lang magpahabol sa dormmates mo. Hehe
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Maganda daw.. Sa pic nga lang yan, cute. Sa personal, nakakata-cute. Hehe
Pax

6 Years Ago

lol, wala kaming ref kaya walang libre... :D
atleast cute, maganda parin...:D
This is artistically done. You put it together with much thought and skill. It makes a reader think, which is what poetry should do. I enjoy this clean and easy flow and reading your work each time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Anika.
Very well expressed, many of us feel exactly the same way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

LOL. Thanks, big bro. You are very supportive.
I feel like having a writer's block for so long.. read more
Eddie Davis

6 Years Ago

Even your exercises are well done.

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