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To The Moon

To The Moon

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Moonlight...shining bright

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To the moon...

That witnesses my tears on gloomy nights
And hears my cries on hopeless fights
When it feels my weak and shivering arms
When it sees my fears from possible harms

To the moon...

That makes me see in the midst of the dark
And shines on me and leaves a mark
When it gives me strength and helps me stand
Like I'm not alone in this cruel land

To the moon...

I thank you so much for the light you give
It means so much, like a gift I receive
Your shining beams that make the world to see
The courage, the strength, and the beauty in me!

 



© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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A amazing for the moon and the night. I liked how you use the repetition.
"I thank you so much for the light you give
It means so much, like a gift I receive
Your shining beams that make the world to see
The courage, the strength, and the beauty in me!"
The above lines were perfect. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, CP.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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The moon is very symbolic of the rhythm of our lives. It lights up both our dark as well as happy times. You highlighted this amazingly here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A amazing for the moon and the night. I liked how you use the repetition.
"I thank you so much for the light you give
It means so much, like a gift I receive
Your shining beams that make the world to see
The courage, the strength, and the beauty in me!"
The above lines were perfect. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, CP.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
What a beautiful, lifting write... how you make your confessions to the moon.... the pain expressed over time... the joy of finding peace... the light that breaks the darkness of your world... and within you! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Craig.
It's the most beautiful poem I've read on here. These lines are just wonderful:

' To the moon...

That makes me see in the midst of the dark
And shines on me and leaves a mark
When it gives me strength and helps me stand
Like I'm not alone in this cruel land '

Like a ray of moonlight is reflected on the sea, your poem is a reflection of my life.

Thank you for writing it.

- Jesus





Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A romantic ode for the celestial body too many take for granted. It is there for us no matter what our mood, no matter what the world is going through. It's light can be such a comfort. Your poetry is so honest, Dh.....and it is a pleasure to read. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi. Actually, I am getting back in writing finding inspiration from different things and a.. read more
even on the gloomiest nights, the moon still shines through to give us light...like best friends who are really there during our toughest times to give us light, to help us journey through the rough patches.

really like this poem, my friend.
you write from the heart. it's real.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, sir j.
I want to say that so many stories, poetries has been written on moon, which I feel allures not only human but also all forms of life, and moon is like a companion for us,
a nice read here, thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, hardeep.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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