Care me!!!!

It is expression of love but I dont want to use love word in my poem. Qayamath se Qayamath thak!!!!!

Care me from Dawn to Dusk

Dusk to Dawn,

Care me from Heaven to Hell

Hell to Heaven.

Care me from Sky to Earth

Earth to Sky,

Care me from fire to ash

ash to fire.

Care me from love to Hate

Hate to love,

Care me from whole to whole

Whole to whole

Care me from tip of tongue to hanging tip inside

Care me from torture to torture

Care me from nose to nose 

Care me from lips to lips

Care me from eyes to eyes

Care me from feet to feet

Care me from hitting to laughing

laughing to hitting,

Care me from sillyness to carziness

carziness to sillyness.

Care me from Mountains to valleys

valleys to Mountains,

Care me from dark to light

light to dark.

Care me rivers to ripples

ripples to rivers,

Care me from pain to pleasure

pleasure to pain.

Care me from sorrow to happiness

happiness to sorrow,

Care me from beginning to end

End to beginning. 

Care me from purity to impurity

impurity to purity,

Care me from win to loose

loose to win,

Care me from war to peace

peace to war.

My favorite Voilet color(also known as purple)(Got out from reddish darknesses, Being with  just love, which is everything in my life) and Grey is the only my love from beginning. I just like the nails, which I used to observe,  when are going to be mine. 

-----By a never ending sun rise, Good Morning!!! which doesnt see who is Musalmaan, Hindu or a Christian. Its just you and me to love. 

Author's Note

I believe in true love, which only once can be given for me, instead of collecting stones or being hit by stones, i need a diamond which may be a coal. Insha Allah, Omeeen!.
Out of My personal experience. Yes I believe in myself.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

WoW! I agree with my friend Coyote Poetry! This needs more reviews! Outstanding write!

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a amazing poem. Need to be read by more people. I liked the deep and kind thoughts. I agree with them and I hope to read more of your outstanding work.
Coyote

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for the review, I appreciate your time, for reviewing.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jessy.

[Octavia]

I really enjoyed this poem!

The rhythm of the repeated lines pulled me along nicely. I like the meaning behind them, too. My most favorite lines:

"Care me rivers to ripples
ripples to rivers,
Care me from pain to pleasure
pleasure to pain."

This reflected a close relationship or marriage very well to me.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for your review, you found the intent and inner meaning of my poem, I am glad for it. Yes it represents wedding lock, where key is only death to eternal, if it wants to open the lock. (so key is not generated), I am trying to show importance of wedding, and the life after it, because many of them dont have patience and get scared of getting married.
Marriage life is really amazing life, compared to dating, hope you value the relationship, and all the emotions of married life, I tried to express all of them.
Thank you.

[JessyJacob]

24 hrs of day, is always working with sub-conscious, going towards righteous path, finding her life, filled with garden of flowers, maybe with roses too, lavender lillies, voilet sunflowers, and everything, with two birds running after another, to catch their breath as if catching another maybe with hide and seek too.

[JessyJacob]

Stones are used to hit, but coal is useful item, which can be used for firing and hit too much like stone, if I dont see diamond in you. Everybody is trash now a days, 10 yrs time is very long, all these years how can be both together as one, I think they havent tried seriously. But it is none of my business, glad to know, lovers for long time do exists, and why these two disturbing my family, even though caring so much daily, its not ending, which is hurting my bud and my butterfly, its nearing half their time, i dont want to give time, to let it go, I have and will eat everything in my full plate, if it is meat.

[Alice Maria]

Wow. Beautiful. I went on a ride full of emotion as I read your poem. Great work.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you, I am glad you found a ride with full of all these emoitons, I dont think I didnt missed any of all which are on these earth.

[Alice Maria]

That may be true, but we feel new things every second of every day. I don't think anyone can capture all the motions we feel.

[JessyJacob]

Why not I heard in religious book, Nothing is Impossible, have experimented on my life too, but you also need to be reality, don't overly expect from anybody. We live in Nature, at the least we should be natural, so that miracles happen every second of every day, but not artificial.

[JessyJacob]

I didnt write all the things in between, but I had drawn and put limits on extremes, if you cross those boundaries, then exploitation occurs. 6 corners of star, with end of extremes. I just captured extremes, I dont think i have any thing missed after looking at your comment.

[Rama Masri]

Amazing, seems like a never ending fairytale. Keep up the good work.

[JessyJacob]

Yeah it looks like a fairy tale, but they are true feelings, hopefully coming soon as ey wish by catching a bouquet thrown by a bride, where she is ready to get bride's blush I think! (it is for someone who is getting ready to married - a photographer).

[Rama Masri]

Well congrats, how about you check out my writing, and give me your opinion on it.

[JessyJacob]

Your stories are confusing, I didnt read all, just catched this noteof detective, its not that I am biassed, i am trying to say true fact. Yes I do agree as a detective, because once failed and again we need to trust, for a chance, but there are good people around so many, but when it is family life, you should need not go for him, it will be very nasty thing to be observed or observing whether I am being observed. Detectives shouldn't be in home, then no peace.
But try to maintain little values atleast, so that we wont be looked like what we are, we are changing the attitude day by day, with new lessons. I dont want to be part of 3, I will believe in 3 in 1(only two and we cross other 2(boundary)). I know I can be safe like how you told i will come back. I dont need to go, to cross the boundary, I am already inside boundary, you wont be understanding me, I know. you 3 went in the dream. Thoda jealousy(exceptional possessiveness) hothi hain. I mean fire for you.

[JessyJacob]

I just gave my opinion, dont think that I am driving smebody's life, everyone is free, but i am locked in only a family, no ill thoughts.

[JessyJacob]

Please dont teach me my own lessons, I care till end to beginning, hope you understand. Its not like polythene cover, just used, cant be recycled. Everyone has their role on this earth. I am done in finding one, felt it is only one Him.