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overall - from what i've read so far it is really good and is running at a medium pace which is good because if it's fast paced - it's just rushed and the reader gets confused . character development seems to be plotted very well and Dagger is my favourite character so far - i like her edgy kick - a*s feel and i like the story as it's an everyday problem which is sometimes good to write on because people can relate to it . my favorite chapters are Somehwere / Command Prompt and Deal . good write and i'm looking forward to reading the next chapters

Posted 12 Years Ago

So I read the first few chapters of the book (and don't worry I will go back and review each of them and finish reading the book) and I love the concept you created. It's completely entertaining and I really can't wait to read more. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago

overall - from what i've read so far it is really good and is running at a medium pace which is good because if it's fast paced - it's just rushed and the reader gets confused . character development seems to be plotted very well and Dagger is my favourite character so far - i like her edgy kick - a*s feel and i like the story as it's an everyday problem which is sometimes good to write on because people can relate to it . my favorite chapters are Somehwere / Command Prompt and Deal . good write and i'm looking forward to reading the next chapters

Posted 12 Years Ago

it is no telling
not not telling, i believe..
It is a nice start of the story, keep on working on it

Posted 12 Years Ago

I think this could be a very interesting book, it is a modern problem and sounds very cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is clever. I think it would make an interesting book. HTML is actually a code though not a format. Everything at the beginning that you have is what would make the font appear but you wouldn't actually see it...

Posted 12 Years Ago