Otter Water

Otter Water

A Chapter by Dhara_Ditzy Kat


Once a naughty little baby otter

Always liked to pee in the water

Rub-a -dub-a-dub-dub-dub

His mum threw out the tub

The baby went out with the bathwater
 


© 2020 Dhara_Ditzy Kat


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Love how you blend my all-time favorite theme -- wildlife -- with the down & dirty human tendencies of bathtime. I've always wondered why we don't bother with the fish s**t and crawdad piss in the river, but when we think that another human peed in the pool, that's reason enuf to shut down that bacteria breeding ground! People are so damn fussy! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


I have always found otters adorable and your limerick does this little creature poetic justice. Such a lovely little ditty this one, Ditzy. A nice change from your ribald ones!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the love today, dear Marina 💕
A limerick as cute as you Ms.Kat. And just as pretty 😍

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

Lol. So generous with your compliments aren't you? Haha. Not falling for it. 😹
Smiling at this one Ditzy and remembering bath time for the little ones. Seeing a nice streak of yellow dispersing in clear water:) Not only naughty baby otters. Look after that baby otter mum. He doesn't deserve that. Cute limerick fav Kat.

Chris

Treats.......


Posted 3 Years Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

Awww....she regretted it instantly and got him right back in! With lots of fish too! Thanks my frien.. read more
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Sounds like the start for a children's book, "The Naughty Baby Otter". Find a drawing artist and you are on your way with this one. Cute limerick, Ditzy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

Thanks dear RA. Lovely to see you today.
God, don't let that otter swim in the pool....where is the lifeguard?

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

Lol. So true Jacob. Where are they all?
Thanks for looking in!
That little otter.
Grew up all alone.
Just a rubber duck for company.
Nobody else to phone.
He still peed in the water.
Exposing himself every day.
The Police were not amused.
Jailing him for thirty days.




Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

3 Years Ago

In jail there was bad company again and niw he's on a staple diet of cocain. Lol. Thanks for providi.. read more

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