Ruining Ferraris (Limerick)

Ruining Ferraris (Limerick)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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English Limerick.

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There once was a puppy named Kahri,
who cruised in the desert safari.
His butt stuck like toffee
when he pottied coffee,
and ruined his master's Ferrari!


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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I think it's adorable. Suggestion, thinking you are maybe not entirely happy with it due to the near rhyme with the name, which could easily be fixed unless the poem is actually dedicated to a human of that name or a puppy with that name. If that is the case my suggestion would be to somehow denote the pronunciation in the formatting of the name.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

Yay! So now I think the name should be a silly one to rhyme with safari and ferrari so like Kari or .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:P you have me on the name part, thanks again :))
Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

I love it. yes, that sounds awesome.



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Too, too funny. Perfectly done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This made me chuckle a bit. The image fits too.
It's good to be silly sometimes esp for melodramatic artists like moi :P

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I'm glad it made you chuckle :D and yes, def a nice change for me to be silly haha
Thanks so .. read more
Sacandalous, girl!!! This is adorable! This from someone who can’t write a limerick to save her life. :):)

V

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Hahah well, writing limericks did save my life in a way or I would be drowning in depression :x ;P I.. read more
Verse

2 Years Ago

Yes, my friend. Me, too. :):)
These are all great
How can anyone be mad at a puppy

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

;p I wouldn't know 'cause I haven't owned one. Thanks so much for reading, john :)
Mmm. Naughty puppy! That puppy probably sleeping outside now! Hopefully he doesn't ruin another car :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

;P haha hopefully! lol
thank you for reading and your words here, Sarah :))
I had a cat once, name PJ. I took her to the seaside with me in the car and halfway there she did a potty on the back parcel shelf. Unfortunately for the both of us, she'd eaten something that disagreed with her and it ran like a river. I never did entirely get the smell out and I spent a fortune on air fresheners and sprays before I part exchanged it, (the car that is.)

PJ passed on just over eight years ago now, but her 'gift' is still very fresh in my memory :))

Beccy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

I've never owned cats and dogs as pets but have always thought that it might be like that. ;) memori.. read more
Gross!!!!!!!! and funny :) I have a feeling Kari is going to be looking for a new home soon.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

:D haha thank you! Glad you found it funny :))
Hey, Doc! : D
Excellent poetry, great flow, and spot-on rhymes … wow!
This is gobsmackin' hilarious, and just look at that dog's mischievous grin as he's tooling along, ears flapping in the wind, his paw filled with gay colored balloons, and what a cool Ferrari.
The whole idea is simply ridiculously rollicking fun!

You really outdid yourself with this one, Lady-Poet … KUDOS!!! ⁓ Richard 🤪

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Your praises keep me going on these silly limerick adventures! :D Thank you so much for appreciating.. read more
Ha ha ha - good light humoured write! Mind you … it could have been something else the puppy excreted to ruin the upholstery … than he would be in the 'dog house, not the car! ah bliss … :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

haha hmm wish I could have come up with the idea before lool thanks for the fun review, Phill! Appre.. read more
Hey like the poem, and love the balloons. Very nice.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you like it :)

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