Where is the word?

So where is the word,
That can stop the world,
That can say what I feel inside?
A simple, short, honest word?

I'd love it, if we could speak,
Open, honest words,
And not seek
Old, infinitely repeated works,
Of evil, painful words,
That act like sharp, bloody swords.

So where is the word?
That can say what I feel inside,
That can put the truth into sight?
So where is the word?
A simple, short, and honest word...

Author's Note

But really... Anyone know the word i'm lookin for?

Reviews

[ANTO]

Im really going back a bit here but when I read this I remembered 'Dune' where the warriors all had their own word/sound as a weapon. (I think?)
If it doesnt exist - make it up, I say. You would be in good company I.M.

A deep and intriguing write. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yuppie. :) thanks for readin :) as for makin it up...hmmm...i just have to watch for one thing... That it wont make people think that i went nuts...lol. :)

[ANTO]

A guy on my favorite radio station who is also a rap star used the word 'dench' so much to describe things that were good and he used it that often on the radio and elsewhere that it entered urban slang then recently was added to the actual dictionary (Macmillan)
https://www.google.co.uk/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=dench%20meaning

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. That is interesting. Btw... Who is it?

[ANTO]

Lethal Bizzle - British rap star - he coins new words all the time.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kyVcEL0-iWg

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'll check it out :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Many words can be searched for. Some are easy to be found and some are hidden in places. Safe and sound. Very good poetry. Left the reader with questions and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Cassie]

Love is the word but love is not always the answer...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Love is sometimes painful... But sometimes it is the word We're lookin for.

[fattycbreezy52]

For a person like me who speaks a lil' less,I would love to say that let that word be something which is inexplicable.Let that word be something abstract and not concrete.The word should be such that our mouths wouldn't have to labour at all to articulate it.It means,it will come just flowing on its own.Let eyes be that vital mode of communication.
Loved it.I could imagine you asking the same,haha.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[sereenaoutloud]

Wow , this is brilliant IM, i know that feeling well it would be awesome if there was just one word that could hold that much power , to convey all you feel!!
You certainly convey it all beautifully in this write my friend! Bravo :)

[dan]

IM, You may not be able to fine 'the word' but you've certainly found your voice. This piece resonates with the aspects of life that jump into our paths to throw us off the scent, plant that seed of immortal doubt. Again, I like the direction your writing is taking you on right now. Keep it up! take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for reading :)

[AaronFreitas]

It would be amazing to have that one powerful word that can say so much! Nice write :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

So true :) thanks my friend :)

[A writer]

Hello again, mister popularity :) lol (I think I'm gonna call you that from now on... Lol.) anyhow, back to the poem... I think its just a feeling that you can not express, or think that no matter how much you write about it, and how well you write about it the readers still can't feel it. Searching for the proper word to express something. Now thats my best guess, so don't sue me if I got it wrong. Lol. Either way, its just darn beautiful. You got me jealouse again.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) And yeah! thats the exact meaning of it. Just a simple wish to express somethin, so that the readers know exactly what i wanna say.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nothing more, no deeper meaning, just a wish to be able to make the reader understand the meaning behind a poem, or story.

[A writer]

And you wrote an amazing poem about this simple desire... Yup...thats you. :) Thanks for sharing. :)

[closed]

the quest for literary finality is infinite
that's why we

write on


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[E G TEN]

Hey IM, the word you'll never find, but you can feeel it
In your heart, great input and angles you used here.. thanks fir sharing..

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)